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Hi, guys. I have good news for you, finally I finished the Pre-Alpha version of 0.1 Witch Hunter. (promised in late September - early October, but there were a lot of bugs, so the game was delayed for a week). Despite the fact that the version of the game 0.1, the game contains about 5 scenes (+ additional erotic content). Currently download the game can 5$+ patrons (the game will appear in the public access in a month) by link https://www.patreon.com/posts/official-0-1-14767127 Thanks for your support!

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Ghost

Hey dude, enjoying the alpha so far. I have not done that much yet but i have some suggestions. I noticed that there is only one line of dialog/monolog for any action(for example if you are talking to yan lin, she only says one line every time) more dialog/monolog would help with the story telling. I feel like the introduction is a bit short. I like the money system and would love to see it as a big factor in the game, buying the items is a bit quick though i suggest making the items allot more expensive and if there could be different types of items for the story as well as cosmetic and miscellaneous items that would be cool, like other outfits for the girls to wear or toys. For the money system if you where to put things in like you could buy other types of books to sell more popular products for the store or invest in advertising so that your daily income increases that would justify the very expensive items. Also whoring the girls out for income. The information system of Elyon is a nice touche, a bit simplistic though and i feel that it is not really explained properly. I love it so far, the detail with 2 of the C.H.Y.K.N. girls when they where younger is a nice Easter egg. Your art is fucking awesome, really well done so far.

Ghost

Also i noticed a bug with Miranda that after the first potion she just gives it to you with out you needing to ask her for it again or giving her the ingredients again. You also never pay Elyon apart for the favors she does for you, would be nice if you had to juggle her usual pay with her favor pay it would make the game more challenging.

Ghost

One more thing, i don't think that your money should ever go below 0, it makes the game to easy. If you do not have the money the action should just be refused (for example not having enough money for a favor elyon should get mad and refuse to do the favor) and not having enough money to pay her at the end of the week means she leave and its game over. I know this is allot of feedback on the alpha and i am trying to give constructive criticism.

Deathknight134

He knows about the Miranda bug. I told him about it when I was testing 2 weeks ago. I haven't seen this version yet, but I imagine the text I edited for him is in it. But keep up the feedback, he needs it so he can improve. I agree with your ideas, but not really the whoring one.

R.C.

Just played through the alpha and the art looks amazing. Can we expect the other WITCH girls or is it just Elyon with sometime appearances by Cordelia and Will? I was really interested in the idea of Irma or Hay Lin showing up eventually. I know this is just the first version, but I'd like to know if those 2 will show up in the future.

Deathknight134

All the characters Will show up, but the main focus will be around Elyon. Btw, kudos to you if you get my pun. xD

lazytarts

Yes, I know about the bugs and drawbacks of the game that are at the moment. But I already tightened up too much with the release of version 0.1. I'll try to take into account all of this and improve the game. Thank you for your feedback.

lazytarts

The game will be attended all witchs. The game will not focus on the Elyon. After she ends all the actions and Cedric will inform her that she is a princess, she will go to the Miridan to the Phobos. Cedric in the meantime can corruption (and fuck after) other witchs and other characters in the city (I would like to make it happen in the order that the player wants)

Anonymous

Solid demo my man! It flows really well and doesn't feel like it was made by a 15 year old programming student so it's already better than 80% of all games on Patreon right now.

Deathknight134

Huh, you told me it would be focused around Elyon.

nacia belk

This might be odd, but I Hope that this game has multiple endings. Would like a more neutral or good ending, rather than just a corrupt em all ending. Though that is not to say i would not be a very enjoyable ending. Simply saying that I would love to see something like that, as this game is already a stand out to me amoung the many others of its genre. Not sure if you will ever see this post or respond to it Somka. But I felt i should say it nonetheless.

lazytarts

Yes, so far I'm thinking of making a few different endings. thanks for the feedback, this is truly important to me

nacia belk

Thank you Somka, im glad you responded to me and decided to hear me out. I do hope that one day this game will have good or neutral endings. Or at least endings that could be called good or neutral , after all the Prince of Lies cannot be TOO good, as some might say.

EE

Leaving a comment on the game in the last post seeing as it contains spoilers for non-patrons. But for the non-patrons on the fence, the demo is relatively bug free, the art is fantastic and it has a nice chunk of content for 0.1 release. I recommend supporting.

Side Effect

I'm glad to hear your game is proceeding so well. I can't wait to play it one day.

nacia belk

Here is an idea in the game. We imperceptibly bring the girl whichever girl to a breakdown, in which she maliciously hurts her boyfriend (maybe with her magic power) and he falls into a hospital in grave condition. And then you are given a huge space for any action. Look. There is a sense of guilt for the damage done, and the desire to learn how to control / control one's strength where you become a teacher, and the same money for treating a guy seems to be a much more noble motive. Granted I know that it would be against what happened in the show, because she learns about her powers much much later. And she kinda broke down when her boyfriend broke up with her, so I don't think it'd fit. But I think it is still is an interesting idea. Does anyone else agree with me? Hope Somka sees this.

Ghost

I Agree but Elyon already has a story though, but the idea can still be used for some of the other W.I.T.C.H. girls that i think he has not yet started with like Taranee, she has the most physical damaging power or Irma who miss uses her powers allot.

nacia belk

Hard to argue with that ghost. Your right that it would fir more with other W.I.T.C.H girls. Heck, this idea could be used to implement the snake form. Have a combat mini game maybe with the form that has Cedric, 'Summon' a monster for the girl to practice with in a fight that is really him in disguise and if they lose the fight, they get 'punishment or discipline' by Cedric hands.

lazytarts

I was post this post on 8ch and asked how you like this idea) For other girls already have an idea for stories and things like good, but with the elion with the plot so far everything is bad, I would like to fix it

nacia belk

Um...I found this on 8chan and decided to bring it here. Sorry if i did not make that clear. Was going to tell you that if you responded. Also im not sure what 'I was post this post on 8ch and asked how you like this idea)' means. Typos? I just though it was interesting and worth discussing here with other fans of the game and show.

lazytarts

I meant that this message with 8chan was written by me) I wonder what others think about this idea

lazytarts

But reworking the entire existing plot will take a long time

lazytarts

Already on many resources laid out a link to my game. I think to find and download right now it will not be difficult)

nacia belk

Oh got you, well you have my vote for saying its interesting. But...You don't have to rework the entire existing plot. Necessarily you might not even have to change it much. I can see 3 ways you can keep the plot as you have had it, or slightly alter it. Way one is simple, give a choice. By that I mean, when say the boyfriend shows up, you could have several options, there is the in place sleeping potion, but maybe there could be another option. Perhaps we could instead make a sort of 'power' potion. One that causes Elyon, upon drinking it to have a uncontrollable surge of magic power, when she experiences strong emotions. From there it would be easy to conjure up 'evidence' of her boyfriend cheating on her, which would have her go confront him and due to her being hurt by him supposedly 'lying' to her, her emotions flare up and...Well the potion kicks in and the rest you wrote and then she comes back to the shop and the teacher angle is unlocked as perhaps Cedric could tell her that he can teach her to control her magic, and help pay for her boyfriends hospital bills though she must follow his 'Every' command. This would make her willing to do much more for Cedric to help her boyfriend and would make it so Cedric can make sure she does not grow too powerful.

nacia belk

Option 2 and 3 i feel i should only voice if you are curious. After all you did not ask for my ideas so i should now throw them at you unless you wish to hear them.

lazytarts

So it would be really easier than reprocessing the whole story completely. Soon, I will add a vote in which direction to move the plot, or fully revise it

Starwolf-001

This is really nice. Hope to see more in the future. However, not sure I'd support for 5.00 USD a month. Maybe 1.00 USD or 2.00 USD.

Starwolf-001

I'll keep my eyes on this. With art like this and a well thought out story and UI mechanics I might help out in the future. :)

nacia belk

Excuse me somka. First i want to say thank you for placing my idea as a choice on the polls It means alot to me. Secondly however, i found something you might be interested in. I know you are looking for ideas to help you out with the game, so i hope you will take a look at this story. I am sure you will find it..Helpful with your plans for other endings and such. <a href="https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8192372/1/The-Unexpected" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8192372/1/The-Unexpected</a>

lazytarts

Thank you, I will definitely read later, so far I have so little free time