Bleeding Out in Fury (Patreon)

The door exploded inward at dawn.
No warning. Just the suppressor’s muted cough and the sharp ozone scent of gunpowder filling the small room.She reacted on instinct, Glock already in both hands, stance planted, ponytail whipping as she pivoted.
White sports bra stretched tight over sweat-slicked skin, black leggings clinging to quivering thighs.
Heart hammering loud enough to drown out everything else.First shot – low and brutal.
The bullet smashed into her gut just above the waistband, a hammer blow that folded her forward.
White-hot fire erupted deep inside, spreading like molten lead through her abs.
Muscles spasmed involuntarily, clamping around the wound in futile defense.
A wet, sucking heat bloomed outward; thick warmth soaked instantly through fabric, trickling hot down her belly in rivulets that felt like boiling oil on chilled skin.
Coppery blood flooded her mouth as she bit her tongue from the shock.
Breath exploded out in a sharp, animal grunt – “Ughhh!” – followed by shallow, panicked pants that tasted metallic.
Nausea rolled up in waves, stomach churning with the violation.
Yet she forced her arms steady, sights wavering but still on him.
Pain screamed in her core with every twitch, a deep, grinding ache that made her legs tremble.Second shot – higher, merciless.
The round tore into the upper curve of her right breast, ripping through firm muscle and glancing bone.
Lightning exploded across her chest; white-hot knives twisting under the skin.
The impact jolted her backward half a step, bra fabric darkening instantly as blood welled up in a pulsing gush.
Warm streams raced down the swell of her cleavage, sticky and slick against heaving ribs, cooling rapidly in the air to leave icy trails.
A raw, guttural scream tore from her throat – high and broken – echoing off the walls.
Tears stung her eyes; vision swam with black spots.
The breast throbbed with every heartbeat, each pulse sending fresh fire radiating to her shoulder, down her arm.
Fingers numbed on the grip; the gun felt impossibly heavy.
Sweat poured, mixing with blood, salty on her lips as she gasped.Final shot – the heart-killer.
The slug drove straight into the inner swell of her left breast, punching deep into the center of her chest.
No dramatic spray – just a dull, wet thud followed by an enormous, crushing pressure that stole her air.
Her whole body arched violently, spine bowing as if electrocuted.
Mouth flew wide in a silent, then shattering scream; lips peeled back, teeth bared in rictus.
A thick, choking gurgle rose in her throat – wet bubbles of blood frothing at the corners, tasting like warm pennies and iron.
Cold spread outward from the wound in sickening contrast to the burning core; ribs felt cracked, lungs seizing with every failed inhale.
Vision tunneled to gray; the room tilted wildly.
Legs gave way completely.
She crashed backward onto the bed, ponytail fanning across sheets like spilled ink.
Arms flopped wide, fingers curling once then going slack.
Chest rose in shallow, irregular hitches – each one weaker, wetter, accompanied by a bubbling rasp deep in her throat.
Blood pooled warm beneath her, soaking into fabric, cooling against her back in sticky patches.
A final, shuddering exhale escaped – pink foam on pale lips, eyes half-lidded staring at nothing.
The metallic tang lingered on her tongue as darkness rushed in, swallowing the pain at last. Betrayed. Riddled.
She fought until her body simply refused.

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