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Chapter 13 (TD SI) (Patreon)

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2025-04-21 11:54:58
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2026-09

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Chapter 13 (TD SI)

8/11/7956 C.R.C Fort Independence, General Blitzkrieg's Quarters Military District, Thani, Telos IV The capital of Telos IV was Thani. I say 'was' because the city that was once the capital is now a war-torn ruin that's been slowly falling apart ever since the Telosian Civil War. At least, unti...

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Sea Bass

The new emerging force In the galaxy is going to be powered by mad scientists on Telos, guns, and Fried Chicken. Blitzkrieg is truly bringing the American Spirit to this Universe

Sea Bass

The KX-Series Police Droids are great but I feel they need something melee in their load out, something like a police baton. Having a Riot unit as well with Riot shields and concussion grenades wouldn’t hurt. Also I just realized we never got to see Lona’s reaction to being told about the Personality Matrixes. We sorta just see her gloss over it in this chapter.

Sea Bass

Imagine if that BX that Blitzkrieg had assigned as a caretaker for the Old Man and his Grandkids is ND-5 from Outlaws (Most likely not but a man can dream). Say what you want about the game but ND-5's design is one the coolest for a Droid in all of the SW universe to me. There is just something so perfect about Machines in trench coats.

Sea Bass

Love the new section talking about the CIS Marines program. Speaking of the Marines, I think a subsidiary that General Blitzkrieg should recreate for them is Bad Company of Battlefield fame. You can include solider rejects who are talented but didn’t make the cut for the Marines. They could fight with unconventional tactics while maintaining that crackhead energy. It would be really on brand to see them do things like giving piggyback rides to each other to shoot over walls or say things like, “Would you rather fight 100 Porg sized Rancors or 1 Rancor sized Porg?” while in the middle of a firefight. Also would be funny seeing a Jedi’s reaction to the smiley face logo attached to a detonator before being blown up.

Sea Bass

Reading the new sentences, I would describe that the Shadow Collective was more made up of more Crime Syndicates than gangs. Wish there is a easier way to send small comments like this without clogging up the feed. Also this is the exact vibe I think would be perfect for the CIS Bad Company https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DrMxVAberuU