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[WIP | hkvh] haitham in rut 🔞 (pt 5/6) (Patreon)

Published:
2023-07-16 00:04:48
Edited:
2023-07-16 01:19:02
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2026-06
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what is anatomy

in this part kaveh’s under the effect of the knot + phermones that makes ppl give into primal desires so that’s why he has 0 filters when he talks ;u; idk how i’ll make that clear tho

ALSO PLEASE HELP the dialog is written messily on purpose cos i’m at my wit’s end how do you make characters say “nut in me” without you know saying “nut in me” i’m crying also on a scale of 1 to 10 how corny is “breed me” oh my godd

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Kait Capacio

How about "I want to feel /all/ of you inside of me" 👀

Bell

👀👀👀👀👀 oooohhhh that last line 🥵

Rye_as_Rain

"Breed me" is INCREDIBLE 💚💯

C

Oh my god, this gave me goosebumps, I just love how tender Haitham is with a blissed out Kaveh 🥺 especially the 4th page top panel. Also, seems like Kaveh is asking the big question 😳

Cavalierious

There is literally nothing better than your partner just being blunt during sex like have him beg to be bred and you're golden

kay

Breed me is hot trust 👍

achilleo

"al haitham pls come inside my anaussy" or smth/j also lmao i dont think breed me is horny,,, i would fold if my gf told me that and we are lesbians dhsahdshfh there are things that people say in bed that are horny as hell but hot in the moment !!! MAKE THEM BREED NORAN/lh

havi

claim me is always good

MikoPiko

Oh god oh god oh god the last bubble I can't oh my god

Rebecca Faith

"Breed me" doesn't sound cringey in the context! I alsp struggle SO MUCH with smut dialogue, but a simple "come inside" or another short phrase works too!

MikoPiko

Alhaitham's face there holy shit, it's a sketch but I'm steaming

ronnie

god. GOD!!!! also breed me is good….. very good..

SpicySpaghett

"Babe don't pull out" "fill me up" idk chief

Remie

"breed me" is appropriate in this context. You are doing great!!!!! This is looking phenomenal

Nojiko444

Honestly, I love "breed me".... and in this context its even more fitting xD

Noizykitten

“Breed Me” is a classic🤌🏻If we’re going down the corny route we could have Kaveh calling Haitham “alpha” just to make me extra riled up 💃🏻

KNas

Breed me is not corny at all, it's a simple way for an omega to convey just how much they want their alpha. At least to me when I write A/B/O. There's ways to say "cum/nut in me" if you don't want to use that verbage. You can always use the ever simple "fill me up". There's "I want to feel you cum inside"; "fill me with your seed"; "stuff your omega full"; "come, fill your omega full, make me yours"; then there's the def cringe "I look pregnant I'm so full of your cum" (added this one for laughs); "breed me" also gets the alpha to snap into a frenzy and basically fuck their omega into a blissed out stupor

Leticia

Hot: breed me Super hot: I want you to put a baby in me

Hannah

“Fill me inside” “Make me full” “Create a family with me” “Bite me” “Make me yours” (Hands on his stomach) “let me feel you deeper” “I want to feel you more” “…more” “Deeper, please” But “breed me” is hot too 😌

Cikavac

I think sometimes corny is best, breed me is a yes from me xD

bluemonkey307

I love "breed me"! It's a classic!!

Kwelve

omg haitham you're gonna to break him (good) btw can we talk how well is the hug in the third page!!?? omg I adore it, and Kaveh's face in second page, first right pannel ;__;

oopley

this was a crazy notif to receive at work /pos

Jennoasis

Can I just say first and foremost, how much I admire the fact that you're trying new things not only in your art but your writing as well? You have such a love for these characters and such unique ideas/AUs for them. But there's still obstacles to overcome and such and you don't shy away from any of them. This WIP absolutely incredible btw and I'm so happy that you show us the WIPs lol. As for your question, I don't know if this is too in depth of an answer (And if it is, I apologize lol). But every couple has their own language. And you write HaiKaveh's language beautifully. You've gotten some great advice so far in the comments too. And also honestly, I don't think breed me is corny. It fits the dynamic and it's sexy. "Fill me Up" or "Give me More (I need more)" etc. etc. always works well. I think, what I'm trying to say, is that I know that the dialogue for something like this, when you're not used to it, might seem hard to write (Or overcome the "cringe" factor). But trust your gut to and know that we're going to love what you give us :D

Hopeleess

"Breed me" is a good option, also "fill me up", or just the simple "inside, please"... I think Haitham would understand well 🤭 omg Kaveh get railed so good 💕

Lindsey

Holy shit

Beans

THE SUSPENSE OF THAT ENDING OMG!!! 💖💖💖 Also, "breed me", "cum in me", "inside, please", or even "knock me up" or, in the case of a/b/o, "give me your pups" or "put your pups in me" can all be used well in context! Your inner ace might tell you it's cringey but Kaveh is clearly struggling to come up with a coherent thought lol

Cheddar.naps

First love your art 🩷 Second, even though a simple "breed me" would perfectly fit, you could also go down the "fill me up/fill me to the brim" route or something along the sides of "I need ALL of you".

Nxptvne ☆

Idk I personally think “breed me” is hot as fuck like that shit gets me But if you are uncomfortable with using that then you can try “fill me up” or “cum inside” maybe even throw a little “please” in there or some sort of beg

ellark

I can imagine your brain steaming out with those bodies literally making a knot in 360°🙇‍♀️ you are doing an amazing job!! Could hear haitham’s reasoning snapping right there🤭(“breed me” it’s the way to go!)

Aozul27

Alhaitham in rut? More like Kaveh in heat😂😂😂 breed me sounds really hot imo

Marta

Fist of all, THANKS FOR THE MEAL! ❤️ Second, ok, let's make it simple: no need for long requests. "Breed me" it's OK in a/b/o context and not so cringe, but if it makes u discomfort anyway, it can be more simple: "I need you" "I want feel you more" "more, please" "don't stop, please" and so on. I go on the opposite of some people, but please, no reference of pregnancy: it's super cringe. Doesn't matter the context or if the couple is straight or gay: talking about babies, pups or else during sex kills the mood (for me). I know it's my problem, but I needed to telling about TT-TT

Kimy

In this household we love breed me!!

Akira Luna

Ur art makes me go feral😶‍🌫️🍴

autumnsighs

THE TENSION, THE TENDERNESS, IT'S SO GOOD, also i feel like the dialogue you have written here is good. Like the comic has built up to a point where they've basically lost their minds and have seriously gotten lost in the sauce LMAO that context wise, the *mumbling* "in me" "finish in me" and the "i'll fill you up" just hits right. Also the way I gasped and covered my hand over my mouth at the last page because it was so FREAKING TENDER and haitham's expression omfg the things your art does to my brain

wella ☆彡

“breed me” is amazing in my eyes… hehe

Lana

breed me NEVER misses bro

Anee

Oh archons, that was spicy and so tender at the same time. The way you make them touch, hold eo and look at each other omg.. your art is beautiful. also yes MARK HIM, lets get it and mate you two ✋️

Angela Tschabold

How about „fill me up“? 👀 but breed me still hot 👀✨

unagi_kun

‘Breed me’ is hot AF. i think its flawless. But if you want other options for “nut in me” i would go simple and just use “cum inside me” and yeah maybe a “cum inside please” to make it more submissive and 🤌🏼👌🏼💦✨