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ZAN Vol.2 141-END (Patreon)

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2024-06-01 14:00:01
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2026-06
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LucianiKarma88

I guess it’s time to speculate what could happen at the start of Vol. 3! I remember you said that it would be on hold though since you are going to release a side project. I’m looking forward to both! Thank you!

Mlocik97

I don't want to be hater, but I'm really disappointed both with Leo and Zan Vol.2... while I loved Zan Vol.1, because it contained emotions, characters development, some steamy scene, and even small plot. Both Leo and Zan Vol.2 were missing it. In both those there was no depth, no development, no story. Leo in summary was just version of Zan Vol.2, where human was going out of village, got fucked by tebrian, was found out, and tebrian was killed right next day. We knew nothing about the tebrian, as he was simply "some character", without any personality given. Zan Vol.2 on other hand is even worse, because Jay was totally out of character (compared to Vol.1), and story was about they having problem to find job, having fights, and moon falling on them (that was somewhat trolling ending). Even background character got more development than MCs, and yet before you could actually learn more than their names, they were killed by falling moon. WTF... I'm absolutely disappointed, and I don't think this is worth of $3. I myself as writer would never ask for money if my story would be so "bland". I was one of your first reader on Tapas (if you remember me when you made first page of Zan Vol.1, still in old artstyle that was mostly black & white). I don't mean it in wrong, and I'm sure over time you will learn to make really good stories. There were good ideas, it was promising, but I think you need critique and think more about value... I'm sure you gave it a lot of time, but you still have long road until you get to "finish", where you can say "fine, I can sell this for $40, and no one will complain, because I really did good job." But right now, you are still not there. You improved artstyle, which wasn't big problem even before. But the biggest problem is story, depth, character development, logic in story and showing "something new". Because Leo was literally copy of Zan Vol.1 with only change in that, tebrian was killed. I know first steps are hard, and you should try... I'm not saying that it's bad for first try. But it's not good enough to ask for money.