June: Development Sneak Peek (Patreon)
Published:
2023-06-17 16:37:02
Imported:
2026-06
Content
I started with the first short story idea, mainly because I want it to write in a chronological order.
“Fadiya,” you greet her, acknowledging her presence. Her curly red hair tumbles down her shoulders in wild waves, and her amber eyes twinkle mischievously, just as they did when you first met her. Over the years, she has persisted in her efforts to befriend you, and today seems no different.
She takes a seat across from you, her excitement palpable, “I have something I want to show you!” Fadiya exclaims, letting Asha jump onto her lap. “Asha and I have been working on some tricks, I think you will like them!”
Her efforts to befriend you over the years have not gone unnoticed. Fadiya has constantly sought your companionship, organizing things to do together, sharing stories and jokes, and demonstrating her genuine interest in getting to know you.
1. You feel touched by her dedication.
2. You’re open to the connection but a part of you remains skeptical.
3. You’re slowly warming up to her.
4. You find it difficult to open up to her.
5. Despite Fadiya’s persistence, you still maintain a guarded distance.
This part shows the different types of feelings MC can have towards Fadiya in the beginning stage of their relationship. But also I will probably change things up until I release the final version.
Even if Fadiya is a sweetheart, I think with everything that has happened MC will have a tougher time truly letting themselves open up to someone. I think Fadiya standing up to Vincent for MC later in the short story and punching him eases some of those doubts or for a more manipulative MC it might show how loyal Fadiya is.