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Here it is, my loves... the final chapter of When Heroes Fall.

But the story does not end here. I will be continuing what we started with Link and Midna back in What Makes a Hero with the next installment, Why Heroes Rise, very soon. I plan to have the rough draft of the first chapter up shortly. I really hope you look forward to it 🥰

Thank you so much for being on this journey with me. I've loved every single second of writing When Heroes Fall, and I hope you've loved reading it. Sharing this story with you all makes me so happy. I'm truly so passionate about it, so thank you for being here, it literally means the world to me.

I hope you love this chapter! Please, please enjoy it. If you have thoughts you'd like to share, I would be overjoyed to hear them. Happy reading 💕

I've started including a mobile version with bigger text for those of you who prefer to read on your phones. Hopefully it offers better readability!

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AbbzGamez

Awwwww! Lovely somewhat bittersweet ending. I feel so bad for everyone... :( Great job and I cant wait to see what the future holds! :D

Big Jake

A perfect ending is hard to craft in almost any story, but I think you’ve created an ending that could be considered as close to perfect as a human can write 😁❤️ it didn’t wrap everything up in a neat little bow, because that’s not how a story should always close and I think especially not this story. Scars remain but the beginning of healing what can be healed and grieving what can’t be fixed is the perfect ending for this. It’s sweet and beautiful, but also heart wrenching and tragic in a way that makes the good feel earned and the sad feel appropriate. Just so so so great and I’m so happy I was able to be here for it 😭😁 Link begging Bo for forgiveness and Bo being so broken by everything that it’s not even a conceivable option is so fitting but also so heartbreaking 💔 that whole scene was so brutal because it felt like you knew how it would go before it even began, but still hoped for some miraculous outcome. Bo feeling nothing but disdain for the boy who used to be maybe the most important person in the village is so tragic. The proposal scene was so adorable and made the ending feel so complete, like yeah their lives won’t be an idyllic peace but they know that as long as they have each other they can face any threat that comes their way together. Also Midna being the one to propose is so on brand and perfect for their relationship. We all know Link would never push the issue with how much he worries about the uncertain future so her telling him “nah I’m in it for the long haul and here’s the proof” is excellent character work 🔥 I really need Ren to be okay 😭 sad baby boy hours are sad but I’m glad he’s got his dad and stepmom close by and I can’t wait to see how their relationship continues to blossom in the future. Ren and Link sharing a heartfelt talk and hug was so sweet, and Ren slowly beginning the process to healing what’s been broken inside him is a great setup for what we’ll see in the future and I cannot wait. I need that kid to be alright he’s just too sweet 😫 him reaching out to Emmy while in his moms room was a tear jerker big time 😭 Also Uli 😭 poor Uli has been through so much recently, the scene where she finally has to confront that Colin is really gone is so sad, but I’m so happy she wants to build a relationship with Midna and accepts her as her sons guiding light. Her recognizing what Midna means to Link and immediately wanting to have her in their families life is so precious and so amazing that really made me happy to read. Fado is the goat 🐐 😂 I love that his first thought after seeing Link again after so long is “let’s herd goats again like nothing ever happened” is so country farmer friend coded it’s insane I love him. I also love that he clearly has no idea how to talk to Link anymore but he’s trying his best alright he’s a simple fellow 😂 I simply cannot wait for When heroes rise. I neeed more of these characters and these stories 😁 thank you so much for sharing with us and letting us be a part of this incredible journey, here’s to many more! 😁

BlazerPlex2

I haven't started your 2nd book of this series but I'm getting to it, Thank you to the moon and back for making this series, I love twilight princess soo much and these stories make it 10x better. I can't wait for your next book

Selphie Kinneas

Thank you so much 🥹 I hope you love it when you get to it 💕