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When Heroes Fall Ch. 18 ROUGH DRAFT (Patreon)

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2019-09-13 23:32:15
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2026-10-21 02:47:34
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Friends! I have written, and rewritten, and rewritten, just this first half of the chapter that composes this rough draft countless times now. It's another one that I feel has to be perfect, and I will continue to try and get it there. As always, this is only half of what the full chapter will be once it's done. I hope you guys enjoy this sneak peek! Let me know your thoughts!

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Big Jake

I like that when Viscen tries to goad her into showing off her power she doesn’t, it’s a nice change from the constant ‘let me explain everything about my powers and how they work just because I want to show off’ thing that seems to happen so often in stories. Also Ren better know what he’s doing.

chloerosey

I absolutely loved this! I wasn't expecting such a twist when they found Link but Midna's reaction was so amazing! I loved that Ren followed the plan because it isn't in Midna's nature to do so! I honestly loved this and can't wait to see how it progresses! You're working so hard on this and it shows! ♡