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Guys. This is a super rough rough draft. This chapter has come so easily to me that I've spent each day just pouring onto the page without looking back. I have not re-read this once, so it will be drastically cleaned up when you read it again in the final draft. But still, today is my birthday, so it's everyone's birthday! I really wanted to give you guys this super early special peek at this chapter. Just please bear with me and remember that it is super rough lol. Also remember that this is only half of the chapter's full length upon completion. I hope you guys enjoy it! 

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Artorias

Happy birthday!

Big Jake

Ok these villagers are ridiculous. I mean really? Talking shit like middle Schoolers? If Shad was on the stand am I supposed to believe that the paragon of self control, Ashei, would have shown any restraint at all? Or if it had been Luda up there would Talo? I get where they’re coming from, and technically they are correct, but they can stuff it as far as I’m concerned. Also, the Link and Midna stuff was so sad/cute.

Big Jake

Now that I’ve put down my initial emotional outburst I will say that their reaction is perfectly genuine and believable.

Silvia Delgado

Gezz, this gets more intense and sad with every chapter. This blows my mind but how I wanted to finally see Midna and Link properly reunited. Incredible rough btw. And also Happy Birthday Selphie!! Hope you are having a great time today and my best wishes for you!!

chloerosey

So good! Midna and Link's reunion was just brilliant it was so good, and the others were right to get their emotions out, even if it was a bit harsh but that's Ashei for you! This was so so good and definitely worth the wait!