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When Heroes Fall Ch. 22: The Best Laid Plans (Patreon)

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2020-02-29 01:35:39
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2026-10-21 02:46:38
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Hi friends! So, I do all my writing in Onedrive so that I can access my work from any device. This time around, for whatever reason, saving the document to my computer messed up a lot of the formatting and various other annoying things. I tried my best to fix everything, so let me know if you see anything I missed! 

I hope you guys enjoy this chapter! This is one of the pivotal ones, so please let me know your thoughts! Love you guys <3

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chloerosey

This one was so good! Watching the two characters in the latter part of the chapter was so amazing, and to see how one of them so clearly manipulates the other is so well done! I think there was a line break after the Snowpeak part that was missing, though I think that's because of the formatting! :3 Either way I loved this so so much!

Mandelbrot

Reminds me of this: Did you ever hear the tragedy of Darth Plagueis The Wise? I thought not. It's not a story the Jedi would tell you. It's a Sith legend. Darth Plagueis was a Dark Lord of the Sith, so powerful and so wise he could use the Force to influence the midichlorians to create life… He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying. The dark side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural. He became so powerful… the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which eventually, of course, he did. Unfortunately, he taught his apprentice everything he knew, then his apprentice killed him in his sleep. Ironic. He could save others from death, but not himself.