When Heroes Fall Ch. 24 ROUGH DRAFT (Patreon)

Hi friends! This one has a lot more than usual that I plan to fix/perfect between now and the final version as it will be another imperative staple to the overall story. I particularly plan to flesh out the narrative between dialogue in the second half, so keep that in mind as you read. And, the usual disclaimer, this is only about 1/3 of what the overall length of the chapter will be upon completion. We're getting pretty close to diving off into the deep end here, so please tell me your thoughts! Love you guys!