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Hi friends! I am absolutely giddy about where we're getting to in the story. I hope you're excited too! Please let me know what you thought of this chapter! I hope you enjoy :)

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Silvia Delgado

I could felt the tension in all the scenes and I was like 👁️👄👁️. I totally loved how you portrayed Emmeline and Vincen and I can't wait to see what is Emmeline capable to do with her new powers. And I wonder that for Zelda too, I think she's more powerful than we think. I'm amazed with the talk Midna gave to Link, because I forgot about Midna's mother and I can see that this will probably change a lot of things. Can't wait to see more Selphie! And I hope the Twili people is not all dead, no more pain please :'(

Big Jake

Wait can we talk about the fact that viscen stabbed ren with his DINNER KNIFE, and then continued to EAT WITH IT 😂 That’s some serious evil right there lol Excellent as always. Great tension, I especially loved the bit where Midna lays out what Ren must be feeling. Really puts his actions into great perspective.

Selphie Kinneas

That would be the most prominent thought you have of the whole chapter lol!

Big Jake

I only picked it up on my second time through but when I did I couldn’t stop thinking about it lmao

chloerosey

Such an amazing chapter! There's always so much to talk about! :D the emotions are so high and that's what really makes everything flow!

Artorias

Great chapter. Excellent flow of writing couldn't take my eyes off it!