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When Heroes Fall Ch. 30 ROUGH DRAFT (Patreon)

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2021-07-10 16:29:51
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2026-10-21 02:44:08
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Hi friends! Here is the rough draft for chapter 30. As usual, it is not the full length the chapter will be upon completion. I hope you enjoy! :)

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Hylianticipated

The conversation was so heartfelt and he is right. Forgiveness begins with ones self. That will truly start the healing process. My friend keeps telling me this a dream Link is having and when he wakes up, he will change and be a father to Ren and marry Ilia haha. But we will see.

Big Jake

Aw damn I always forget I’m reading a rough draft I was so invested in that conversation lol Amazing work as always, I always get so absorbed in the dialogue I just love it. Rusl and Links conversation is heartfelt and natural, and the guidance and advice Rusl gives is so impactful not just for the characters but it really spoke to me personally I just love it I can’t wait for the full chapter and the rest of it. As for Ren I am both dreading and looking forward to Calie and Uli, that’s gonna really hurt and I thought as I read that viscen probably has some dirty trick up his sleeve if he gets his hands on ordon, so Ren going there alone worries me to an insane degree 😂 and of course his little interactions with his dad are really heartbreaking just knowing link wants to be there for him but doesn’t know how just gah please guys come on you can do it 🙏 Amazing work! 🙌

Big Jake

I’m still rooting for a time travel scheme to save ilia and then they can be a happy family 🙏😂 jk but i do miss her a lot I'm basically the only big ilia fan in the world lol