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Well hello there! Here is the next chapter of When Heroes Fall. We're getting down to it friends. Please let me know your thoughts! Enjoy :)

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Big Jake

That final scene with viscen and Emmy makes me so excited to see him chained to a rock, loaded into a catapult, and launched into death mountain. that guy is such a butt I hate him lol The chapter as a whole is amazing as always! The crew is really in dire straits right now but that will make the final triumph that much more rewarding (or at least I’m hoping it’s a triumph cause they all deserve some wins, poor guys) The little seeds of connection between Link and Ren is great to see and I love how they feel so awkward and kind of hesitant toward each other it feels very real and is just written very well. I need to dedicate a little paragraph to Rusl and Links moment together cause it is super amazing and their whole talk about grief and living with the burden of it was so touching and beautifully written thank you so much for that. That moment showcases a huge reason I love your writing, it’s just so beautiful and real and natural. Really shows your gift and I thank you for sharing it with us Can’t wait for more! 😁