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Chapters 4-6 of Rift of Souls. 5,800 words. Dysphoria warning — it's really rough near the end in this one! 

This story can't really claim to be AI-assisted anymore, all it did was help unstuck me like 3 times and help with some description in two spots. I've also been going back and editing the hell out of episode one cuz I realised just how much it overdid it on the description there.

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Rift of Souls E2 - Reconnected

04 // Reconnected (Un)Lucky The sun was peeking out over the cityscape below the horizon, casting a dim, reddish glow across the ravaged cityscape. On every side were crumbling buildings, their once pristine glass and steel facades now shattered and scorched. The air was thick with the smell of s...

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Kaiyalai

A bit past halfway through this episode, very loving it and hoping this story eventually continues, but before I forget to ask... What game or games might one play that would be similar to Rift of Souls, at least in terms of being a scifi MMO? Any particular recommendations?

chirivulpes

Sorry, I have no idea >.< I don't really play a wide variety of games, I don't really have the money to. With this story in particular I spent a lot of time trying to do something unique, incorporating some mechanical aspects of the few games I do play, like Warframe and Destiny 2. Which *are* scifi, but they're also extremely well known and I dunno if I'd really recommend either of them? Warframe is extremely grindy and Destiny is really expensive to get into it nowadays and everything about it feels incredibly stingy.

Kaiyalai

I understand, and that makes sense. Also, just finished reading Episode 2 and my heart weeps for Annie. Really hoping Episode 3 brings some relief for her.

chirivulpes

Sorry, accidentally sent the last message before I intended to, didn't expect enter to send and haven't used this UI before :p I've edited it. I might continue this story at some point, but I think I'd be editing the first couple chapters a bit again first, and also I need to finish some other projects first too. It is the story I think had the most promise, though, fwiw. I think this was like maybe halfway through?