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All new patrons and whoever don't know about the follow up post, this is your chance to give me feedback and state your wish of what you'd like to see in the game. I'll answer every question you might have so please feel free to ask.

Next version I will add a bimbo transformation for Victoria I've got so many suggestions on which character that's going to perform the transformation on Victoria candidates are: Ginger, Wendy, Orc girl and Blake with friends. I've not decided yet and I'm leaning towards letting more than one character transform her. 

I do also want to add a new perk/state oral fixation which will make Victoria more likely to perform oral spending to much time in the gh or sucking to much cock will trigger this. If you have any suggestions on what the oral fixation should contain feel free to tell. I'm thinking of forcing the player with oral fixation to spend at least 50 MP on sucking cock, what are your thoughts on that?

There will of course be progression in the story line, my aim is to progress both brothel and bogwart story lines in next update.  

The image above is the orc town where the ending will take place, it's an old human town which now is occupied by the monsters. Feel free to add suggestions on it as well. 

I will also add more scenes, the focus is Henry (the old man) Tax collector (he needs a name). My goal is to release it before the end of this month but it might be hard to accomplish.  

Let the discussion start!

Cheers! Yours truly WhiteRaven

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Onedrift

I vote Wendy. Once she sees Victoria (Or other name) as getting too slutty, she starts suggesting more and more bimbo clothes for Victoria to wear, all the while whispering things to her while she washes clothes. etc. But I'm a fan of slow bimbofication!

WhiteRaven

I forgot to mention the bar maid as well, it's an interesting concept which could also be hided from the players at the start and after a while when it's discovered Victoria is already corrupted slightly.

Reela

My vote on the barmaid for sure. What if Victoria refuses to dance, and is too prudish for the guests' tastes (slaps hands away etc), so to open her up more the bar maid gives her special drinks at the end of her shifts? And when she's bimbofied enough it opens up to all kinds of scenes (both the old ones and new) at the bar.

Jacob Larson

With Vicky's breasts having gotten bigger I would love to see lactation and or milking come into play!!

Clint Carpenter

Vicky should have a relationship with someone where she's not always being referred to as slut or whore. Maybe the old man or maybe Wendy.

Lee Thompson

As long as there's humiliation and degradation I'm happy ;)

bortangelo

A continuation/conclusion to the bunny girl track. It seems like a logical early corruption scenario where Victoria is semi unwilling to give a BJ to the innkeeper in public and then ~smack~ "To Be Continued in Further Update" or whatever...

christer tollefsen

I preferr the mary bimbofication wich leave alot of diffrent options like innkeeper can play a part blake can play. Even wendy the washing lady.

DramaCoach69

Seems logical. Mary has gently pushed Victoria along. I can see Mary, working with the Innkeeper. If Victoria is already working at the brothel as well, then that is an added bonus towards bimbofication. Of course, whose idea was it to have Victoria work in the brothel? Yes, Sarah can also be a part of this. Sarah has to meet expenses somehow, and pimping girls like Victoria might be a means to an end. Regardless, even as a bimbo, I want Victoria still to have some commitment to finding her parents. The irony might be that when she finally meets her mother, Mom will be pregnant with an orc baby and Victoria pregnant with the innkeeper's. On another note. Is it just me who sees a resemblance between the stccky "john" in the brothel and the innkeeper?

christer tollefsen

Well there is sarah to that is an angle i dont know what whiteraven har planned for her. But i do actually think sarah cares about vicky.

DramaCoach69

I really don't think fellatio is as physically exhausting as a shift as a waitress, or a full body workout as a stripper. I think 25 is reasonable.

WhiteRaven

I thought about adding a barn/house in the orc city where hucows are being held to milk them daily since the orcs can't really fuck all woman they capture but they still want to get value out of them.

WhiteRaven

Old man and Victoria will develop a dominant submissive relationship. But I get your point and since all good men died trying to save their wives in the monster attack I intended for Victoria to only meet bad men. Though she could develop a relationship with a girl, becoming friends or something like that.

WhiteRaven

Well she does give her a herb tea to cure her pregnancy, so she could have more magic herb drinks in store maybe to cure cum addiction.

WhiteRaven

Good point he could have her do some daily tasks for him as well, while this doesn't really progress the story line Victoria needs to be very corrupted to agree to help him with his daily tasks and sleep with him.

WhiteRaven

There will be more of that for sure.

Mathias Vahlefeld

a picture for a bad end in the orc city imagefap.com/photo/1432703724/#5 a toasted victoria ;)

WhiteRaven

That could do the trick adding to the missing part. If Victoria gives him a bj in public and then he will of course asks for her to visit his inn which then should open up the possibility to start sleeping at his inn by paying one blowjob like the other girls do. (His balls must be so drained from cum lol)

WhiteRaven

I'm planning to change the rescue mission as well for Sophie instead of saving her directly you need to come back a few times to watch her body and mind transform because of the Goblins.

WhiteRaven

Which is mentioned below every character mentioned can play a part in the slow bimbo transformation.

WhiteRaven

Yes Sarah cares for Victoria though she cares more about the fight against the orcs and transforming Victoria to a bimbo could actually help her with that since then Victoria won't question her motives or orders and is a good distraction.

WhiteRaven

Good point I like that which is in alignment with my plan. Since you're not supposed to stay in the city to long doing so the people there will transform you into a bimbo. Because the ending of the game will depend on how fast you finish the game and in which state.

WhiteRaven

Yes 25 a blowjob so she has to perform 2 blowjobs to satisfy her oral fixation. is it to much mp to spend?

drexxlo

I'd like to know if there is any chance I don't have to put the breast oinment on Victoria as I love her natural breasts and I prefer Jerk's house scenes.

Notalie Portman

Though I much prefer her bigger breasts, I very much support that there should be some version where her breasts don’t get bigger, as long as it doesn’t multiply the number of scenes that have to be rendered. Maybe a choice at some point in the ointment application scene where she can apply it a different way and the ointment only makes the boobs more sensitive.

Reela

Punishment for not following orders and undressing the first mission maybe?

Gooch

for the bimbo transformation, i think you should use blake and friends and the orc girl. you can work the 2nd BE in using the orc girl and blake and friends can turn her into a nympho. Since Henry already has the spanking scene, i think you should go further with that. Maybe have her start to get off by being punished. And he can help her with some anal training for satisfying orcs as an anal whore in the orc city later while she is trying to figure out how to save her mother possibly later. Possibly make Bogwarts slave event repeatable

WhiteRaven

Sounds like only a very depraved version of Victoria heads back to get gang banged. I like your suggestion might add something like that.

WhiteRaven

Good point, Sarah should discipline her because of not following her order so that it won't happen again.

christian giesecke

Victoria bigger boobs and moore Clothings for victoria

Notalie Portman

The barmaid for sure. Here's what I think should happen in that path, building on Drakhnir's idea: The fat tavern owner tries a grab for Vicky during a shift, and Vicky slaps him, offending him and making him stop coming. Barmaid gets mad and demands to know how Vicky is going to replace the lost business. Vicky isn't allowed back into the bar until she goes to the Orc to get bimbofications. Or, if Vicky is working the brothel, Vicky tells her brothel customers to go to the bar, but they demand she get bigger boobs first. Either way, Vicky is pressured into bimbofying herself (with the Orc's help?) to appease Wendy in this path. What do you think?

Notalie Portman

Warning, this is long and contains spoilers. I played through again to refresh myself before deciding on the bimbo transform. First, if there's going to be another level of BE without it being part of a bad end, it would still have to cut off a bunch of paths in order to not make the number of renders explode. I can think of a couple ways to do that, but the bimbo image of Vicky makes me think that WhiteRaven isn't planning that at this time. So, bimbofication would include BE if Vicky doesn't already have bigger breasts. The other changes would be to hair color, lip plumpness, and (perhaps) nails. That still creates the same limitations as the second level of BE, though, or even worse if you can do one without the others. That means that once you start the bimbo transform process you should be on a fairly narrow path until it's complete, so that renderings of the MC on her path to bimbofication are only needed for the events allowed on that narrowed path. Example storylines: Vicky has to prove to suspicious succubus that she's really committed to working in the brothel and Vicky suspects the she's being watched in the town, so she has to go to one of the forest characters to be bimbofied before she dares return. She can be set some tasks there, but the in-between states only have to be rendered for those tasks (say, sucking Priapa's cock with her new lips, giving the goblin a tit-job with new tits, and giving the Orc blonde hair to hold onto while Vicky's eating her out). Then, when it's all done, Vicky is on the bimbo path and can't do a bunch of the things she used to do, or maybe a bunch of events that used to be different all become BJ/titjob scenes (examples: when working as a serving wench, paying taxes, and "paying" to stay at the inn, it's all the same or similar BJ/titjob scene). Even then, we still have a situation where if there's multiple states Vicky can be in when she makes it to the monster town, the scenes there are multiplied by the number of different possible Vickies: regular Vicky, big-boomed Vicky, bimbo Vicky, and then any number of wardrobe changes (though, if sex scenes are naked, that means clothes don't matter so much). So, I would suggest there be only two or three visual states Vicky can be in by the time she reaches the town: 1) regular Vicky 2)bimbo Vicky with whatever the maximum breast size is and possibly 3) non-bimbo Vicky with enlarged breasts. There can be multiple subtypes, like 2a) Vicky is actually bimbofied and 2b) Vicky is wearing a wig, lipstick, and stuffing her bra to look bimbofied, and 2c) Priapa gives Vicky a tea that temporarily bimbofies her. Actual bimbo Vicky, costume bimbo Vicky, and temporary bimbo Vicky all can get different choices at the end while using the same set of renders.

Notalie Portman

Totally separate request: I would love for there to be a "good end" where an impressed Priapa offers to make Vicky her consort.

Jacob Larson

Keep getting the same dream over and over. Its the one with the neighbor next to the tax collector. Vicky give him a tit job and asks him to kiss her. keep getting that over and over!

Narf

Make sure you don't have a "dream battle" between other unfinished sequences.<br>Let's say you have in "queue" both a Dancer and a Blake dream because you just went to both on same day--<br> that means it instead of dealing with this "battle" it repeats an already seen Sleepguy wake-dream.<br>You need to direct the daywork so there can only be one:<br>Even if you started both those sequences it will play the one that you went to on the day--------<br>At least that works for me.

Narf

In my head I imagine a processed Sophie being rather annoyed over Victoria's appearance and "rescue" attempt, and making a scene, which causes the goblins to come back.....<br>But then she does see reason of sorts and bails --<br>without Victoria, who gets captured and can first hand experience the reward--<br> sort of a payback attempt of Sophie's (she fetches her later to prevent G.O.)

WhiteRaven

Spoiler alert! That sounds like a very good way to include the orc girl! This is what I thought about before I did this follow up post: Changing the ending with blake and friends so that Victoria can choose to stay and sleep with them. But they're not pleased with her look and body so they change it, then they start "pimping" her out to other people in town. Or, Angel the succubus finds out that Victoria have seen the captured girls and that they're controlled by her. Angel has no choice but to transform Victoria into a dumb bimbo so she can't do anything about it. That could also be the case with the other bimbo girl in the brothel, she found out and Angel transformed her. Or, Mary notice more customers coming to the bar since Victoria started serving topless and wonders how popular the place would be if she had wider hips, then even bigger tits and at last bigger lips. Mary also tells Victoria that her hair color should be changed and that her nails should be longer and painted.

WhiteRaven

Sophie and Victoria both Bogwarts slaves... hmm... I like the idea! Narf are you saying that Victoria should be captured by the goblins and have the same treatment as Sophie?

WhiteRaven

Good point, you should also be able to sleep at the inn after he finds out about her addiction. Also interesting concept of he selling blowjobs from either Victoria or Emma at the inn.

WhiteRaven

That sounds more useful to the cum addiction trait/perk though. The oral fixation should not be as strong as the cum addiction and only make Victoria suck at least one cock before she sleeps or something like that.

WhiteRaven

I don't know if the monsters actually will eat their captives though :O

WhiteRaven

You should be able to not use the ointment already for every new scene there's a BE version and the old boob size version. I like your suggestion NP! Sounds like Trials in Tainted Space James lol

WhiteRaven

Bogwart slave event will be repeatable! Yes I've thought about adding this to the blake and friends story line as I wrote above, damn patreon message system is not convenient for this sorta communication. This is what I wrote in an earlier message. Changing the ending with blake and friends so that Victoria can choose to stay and sleep with them. But they're not pleased with her look and body so they change it, then they start "pimping" her out to other people in town.

WhiteRaven

James that's a bad end! lol. Consort as in her lover or what you mean by consort? Priapra founds out her captured elf slave is held at the same place as Victoria's mother this ending is totally do able.

WhiteRaven

Yes all this is true, so what I first thought about was making bimbo Victoria tied to the time spent in the town. If you spend to much time there you will eventually be transformed to a bimbo which means during the transformation part if I make it slow the player can only view the scenes available with her new body until she's fully transformed to a bimbo. I feel like the number of renders are totally doable for just adding bimbo transformation but no more. Though to me the bimbo scenes should behave differently than the normal Victoria scenes which adds a whole new layer to the scenes than just bigger boobs did and this is what will take the most time. So with that said some of the scenes in town won't have a bimbo version just because it takes to much time to create them I would love to have a version to them but it's not possible. What is possible though is having all scenes in the orc city a bimbo version.

Notalie Portman

It varies by culture, but it’s usually something like (royal)wife > consort > concubine in terms of the ranks in royal harems and that sort of thing. Meaning that if Vicky makes it through to the end and frees her mother (or at least gives her mother the option!) then maybe Priapa offers her to be an official consort rather than just taking her as a concubine.

Gooch

possible scenerios for bimbofiation and story progression: Victoria can be made Orc girl's pet. this can tie in the 2nd breast enlargement and give her a way into the Orc city to rescue her mother. Orc girl can take her to the city and have her service the orcs and other monsters. or Bogwart can take her to the orc camp a few more times and then decide it would be more profitable to take her to the city since she was a big hit at the camp. They wont take her from him because we already established they dont like cum addicted slaves. They wont take her from Orc girl because she is her slave (Orc property). Either one can have her work similar jobs as she does in the current city to make them money. both scenerios give you a way to tie in sexual training to be able to take bigger cocks in the orc city as well. Her master can train her for the new experiences. Love the game. Keep up the good work

Gooch

Also can you make it to where she can choose to pay the taxman or do his favor each day because doing the blowjob scene everytime gets a little long and boring sometimes if you choose to take that option

Sandra

I would like to see a continuation for the dance scenes. I really like it when the innkeeper asks her to suck his cock.

Narf

Was just loud thinking.....<br>But it would be a fitting reward/punishment (V would see it as a reward obviously) since it was her fault in first place

WhiteRaven

Concubine I've heard about but never consort.

WhiteRaven

I want to add a possibility to skip viewed scenes. It's possible to add it but it will be time consuming.

WhiteRaven

I'm actually going to add that scene in 1.5.0.

Notalie Portman

The division between full wives (who typically come from royal families and become queens/empresses along with their spouses) and consorts (who are official spouses who might rank amongst the nobility but don't reign as queen/empress/sovereign) doesn't exist in as many cultures.

WhiteRaven

I see, well Victoria's title isn't that important in this ending right? Thinking about using royal wife.

Notalie Portman

Extra confusing because "consort" can also be used as a general term for basically anyone who is exclusively mated (for the consort) to a royal or noble.

Notalie Portman

Whatever title you like! Just, one where she's Priapa's favourite slutty wife pumping out heirs instead of Priapa's favourite slutty slave pumping out lesser offspring.

oneminute

are we getting a walkthrough? because , i cant go further in the story, i dont get new informations from sarah. "i will tell you when the plan is ready"

WhiteRaven

That's the end of that story line. When I get time over I will add the walkthrough to my website since google docs don't update what I've been writing to it for some reason.

WhiteRaven

I will most likely start a new game with a sci-fi theme. With different planets and different species, I do also want to try out a new game engine. Maybe unreal engine 4. But I've not decided 100% that this is what I do when AND is finished.