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This is a post where I want to gather all the feedback about the current state of the game and give a view of planned content. This is your chance to affect the game. Any feedback is welcome but keep in mind that I might decide not to add what you suggest. 

I will try to keep myself concise and not spoil too much. If you don't want to have planned content spoiled for you then you might not want to read further. 

A lot of people have asked about planned content for innkeeper, old man, the jerk and bimbo. There's planned content which I have waited to add into the game since I focused on creating content for the orc city where the ending of the game will take place. Nothing is written in stone the planned content might change if I find something more suitable. The planned content are: 

Innkeeper - will demand more sexual favors for staying at his inn. He also want her to stay there permanently. 

Old man - will demand other favors for staying at his house. Such as cleaning and discipline Victoria if she doesn't do the favors. This will lead up to a house maid bad end with bdsm vibes. 

The jerk - will get a bimbo bad end, he will transform Victoria into a bimbo and keeping her as his wife with the other girl. Giving her bimbo tasks such as dress nicely and do her nails etc. 

Brothel - Priapra and debbie path get girls to fuck in the brothel. Victoria will be the one taking in the girls. Sophie path, Victoria will make sure Sophie do all the hard work that's needed instead of herself sort of like a paypack for her being a bitch towards Victoria. Succubus aftermath, scenes with the succubus and Victoria, Sophie and Sarah. Not everyone at the same time.

Slave path - Victoria will after finished training be sold off to Bogwart, minotaur officer in the orc city, jerk, old man or the innkeeper depending on her values. Tying the path with the game. Being a slave will restrict Victoria's choices where she stays. 

Futa potion - scenes with Victoria fucking Sophie and Sarah as a futa. Might add other females too. One time transformation and after the scene Victoria will be a female again. There's too much content as her being a female to add constant futa potion. A scene where Victoria fuck the witch Adeline La Croix as a futa. 

Whore ending - Victoria ends up as a 1 silver whore as Jasmin after the price have been haggled down to 1 silver.

Orc city - finish the infiltration quest adding a scene with a crossroad path. Victoria will have an important decision to make. Not going to spoil what. This will later lead to two different endings. A pure ending and a corrupted ending. The corrupted ending will might only be available if Victoria reaches certain parameters. Not sure yet. 

Orc city - the reputation system will get a change tuning and balancing things. Milking and serving in the fuck room will not have the same reputation. 

The bar in orc city - Victoria will have milking scenes here.  

Bogwart in orc city - more scenes and also tie this up with the ending. If Victoria is a slave to Bogwart there will be a bad end instead of the real ending. If Sophie and Sarah is slaves to bogwart there will be new quests that will lead to the ending. 

Sophie - showing up at the orc city if she wasn't saved with a fat goblin as his pet and sort of broodmother.

New quests - Dealing with the minotaur officer and later the minotaur king.  

The end -  the ending will be a longer scene playing out different scenes which is dependent on choices Victoria has done. Giving birth to orc's and minotaurs will for example play a role here. 

Ending note.

As I said earlier nothing is written in stone. I might decide to switch the paths up. I might have missed listed some things which I'm going to finish too but this is what I have planned for and written down in a text document. I want to speed up the development process to bring out updates quicker than I have been doing. The past year have been rough on me but I will not stop doing what I love. I'm super thankful for the support it might sound weird but creating adult games always was a passion of mine. When I was younger and played games and died or reached certain unfortunate ends in my game I wanted to know more about what happened to the protagonist. But as I started creating games with very little knowledge about creating games I didn't understand the time and effort it really needs. I have learned a lot of things which I'm going to take into consideration moving forward with new games and I'm feeling very optimistic about the future sci-fi game. That story felt a bit personal to share. Anyway, if you have any comments about the youtube videos I have posted feel free to share them too. Anything you want to see more about, I feel to weird talking in them tho. Okey, I should stop writing already:) 

- Yes shut up WhiteRaven nobody cares. 

- I care! 

- Of course you care you're a selfish bastard. 

- ... you're a selfish bastard...

- I'm you, I'm your darkest thoughts dumbass! 

- Whatever...

Once again thank you all for the support! Don't feel obligated to write anything but I'm thankful if you want to share your thoughts with me. 

Cheers! 

Yours truly WhiteRaven

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Calgaria

Thank you, I care! Whore ending sounds fun.

Blackness

Thanks for your work, sounds great. I have nothing to add, except maybe the option to disable bad ends to continue playing would be great.

DramaCoach69

I really like the endings listed, but more than that I am haapy you have regained some energy and enthusiasm. Thank you for your hard work. A New Dawn has alwasy been one of my favorites and my support has never waned.

WhiteRaven

Thank you for your support! Yes they will be playable bad endings. Sort of like an achievement.

WhiteRaven

Thank you for your support! I'm happy you like the planned content.

friendlytraveler

Honestly i have no problem with these endings! Just when it comes to the jerk one, will it be a upgraded version of her former bimbo self?~ because from the sounds of it he makes her overdose to stay a bimbo!

WhiteRaven

Yes upgraded version. Not in terms of shape but with clothing and other things as mentioned. I forgot to say that another bimbo bad end is also planned with the brothel and candy.

friendlytraveler

Hell yeah! Oooo! Will the brothel one be an upgrade in terms of body?~ bigger lips ,ass, tits?

Tanner

Well i like the way it sounds ill have to actually see how it turns out before i comment on them... for me though some major criticism come on endings are already in the game like Blake's path for instance... youve got 82 dreams that we have to dream about this dude, which is why ive never cared for the dream thing in the first place... if you want it in the game then put it in the game.. why do we have to dream about ity first... but then overall ending with Blake compared to the dreams just turns out pathetic and stupid, i hate to put it that way but thats just my honest opinion.. i would rather you scrap that whole ending and continue his path with something actually resembles the dreams.. with him walking her around town with nothing but fishnet stockings, a collar and leash, with a little sign around her neck basically selling BJs to anybody who wants one LOL.. Same thing with the very beginning of the game if you choose to go by yourself.... i'm fine with the goblin bad end but instead of a forced bad end i would have kinda liked to to see an option where one way she finds the goblins, and another way that you could have some fun with, thats possible to make it to the little town but by the time she does, after wandering around in the forest by herself by herself.. her bra has completely broken and fallin off,, after having to crawl through a bunch of thorny brush her panties have been ripped off.. and by the time she makes it to the small camp shes completely naked, starving and dying of thirst... and some of the people in the camp are more than happy to take advantage of our desperate little princess.

ghost viper

could there be an ending with the futa elf taking victoria,sarah and sophie as her concubines

Bjarte

love potential the jerk ending

WhiteRaven

Not decided but it could be an even further step just the last bimbo ending with one scene.

friendlytraveler

Oh ye ye absolutely! Once it hits, game over!

Morton

It all sounds wonderful. I think the only thing I can think to add is pregnancy options, like the jerk making Victoria a sort of "barefoot and pregnant" style wife, Bogwart's goblin broodmare, an Orc broodmare, a 1 silver pregnant whore and so on. Maybe with repeatable events like in the Hucow ending too. (I realize that's more renders, but I think that'd be the sort of post game interaction that makes a game go from good to truly great.)

dark phoenix99

All sounds good. I'd like to see more humiliation. I think she gets to enjoying things too much too fast.

Hunter Booth

Looking good was hoping for more transformation for the bimbo path but looking forward to what you have plan.

WhiteRaven

Might be a possible ending at the brothel. Once Victoria has tricked Sarah and Sophie into getting fucked by Priapra she could take them all three as her concubines.

WhiteRaven

It quickly becomes a lot of work adding pregnancy ending to all endings. It will be and already is some pregnancy ending. Some might have it some might not have it depending on the character and what his goals are. Bogwart doesn't care about children he likes fucking Victoria in the ass and throat for example.

WhiteRaven

It is very hard to find a balance here. This was how the dreams was meant to affect the process. First she gets suggested which leads into dreaming which leads into considering which leads into doing. Giving all the scenes a perfect balance is quite hard.

WhiteRaven

Happy you're looking forward to the plans.

WhiteRaven

Please consider showing some respect when giving criticism to someones kink. The dreams are in the game because Victoria isn't a total shameless slut but a prude innocent young woman who never experienced sex. Dreams is my way to show the changes her mind is going through after being exposed for sexual events that eventually leads up to the sex itself. A New Dawn isn't a game where the protagonist will blow off the first guy she meet. However this isn't easy to balance. Blake ending was a request from a patron which might be the reason it feels off when it comes to the dreams. But it is fully possible to add another Blake path with a pimp ending. Walking Victoria around the town in a leash or something similar. For the introduction, I have considered adding this as another solution to get to the town. This was suggested on itch.io I just didn't write it down nor remembered writing it in this post. Thank you for taking your time and give feedback. Just remember to be respectful towards others kinks.

Anna Gancarz

Can one of the first things you focus on be the slave path? All that other stuff is just adding to existing content. Right now, the only reason anyone would choose the slave path is to quickly lower their dignity so that they can access other parts of the storyline sooner.