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Things are heating up!

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Arc 40

This chapter has been edited by Lonestar, Reiter, and SurvivorSam. In a dark and stony, windowless chamber, a timer ticked on a black device placed on the ground. The minutes flashed and with a click, the hours turned into single digits. T*A*M*S A few hours later Weiss "Why. Are. There.

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BA

Hey, sorry to hear about your hernia, that sucks. Hopefully you can get it fixed with no complications. Regarding the chapter, I don't think the flow was bad at all! In fact, I think this chapter was quite good. A lot went on and I appreciate the discussion of tactics going into the finale of initiation as Jaune and his team reconnect with the other survivors and do a plan to destroy a horde. That said...the fact that Weiss made the plan, I guess she will be the team leader here? That's interesting. Loving her interactions with Jaune too and the OCs aren't too much or anything. I enjoy the extra background info as well. I'd like to see how Pyrrha will factor into this plan too given that she didn't go with Weiss or the twins. Also Yang getting reality checked on her cool weapon is funny.