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I recommend reading the last bit of Percy's pov in chapter 33. I added a few important lines at the end when he arrives in G-14.

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PoD 34

This chapter was edited by Gladiusx and Reiter. Ohhh, scary, such a scary young man. Borsalino stifled a chuckle as he studied the green-eyed boy...stealing glances with Commodore Doll. Oh? Was there something spicier going on between them than just that meeting of theirs? He shrugged inwardly; h...

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Kyrios

Ayyy my favorite. Been waiting for this one. So there's a lot to unpack. First, I reread the addition to the last chapter. That change and Kizaru's reactions here hint that something big is coming, maybe not soon. Percy and crew can no longer stay hidden. I imagine the WG will play heavy roles here so I understand shelving this story until Oda reveals more (given current events), though it does suck because I really love this story. I know you'll do something cool with the WG and Imu and our universal travellers. Second, I see the need for ocs because we don't (even now) know much about past admirals. Akainu is here now and Borsalino is up next. Finally, my favorite part: Zeus's tantrum. PLEEEAAASSSEEE dont put this in hiatus until we see a meeting between them and Yamato and the others. I need to see that before the stopping point. I know you said you've been feeling burned out, but I hope you never stop writing. You've got a talent for this and, as someone who writes too, it's sad to see the passion burning out. 🤞

Bub3loka

Don't worry, I plan to write the meeting next chapter. Chances are, next chapter will be the last before the hiatus, though I could possibly squeeze one more in

REDwolf28

I mean, it’s fairly obvious that Percy is not gonna join the Marines. There’s gonna be a very big conflict coming and I’m here for it.

Bub3loka

I doubt there's anyone who can write a proper Marine story without going full military coup and reforming the WG

Player

I wonder how percy gonna react when he discovers the WG most regarded secret that theres a secret ruler of the world and it's a Devil. 😆 Imu-sama. And this devil has beef with Joy Boy the Sun God. That spans 800 years later. When this happens. Im gonna get the popcorn. Anyways, keep cooking king.

D Evans

Just thought about this but percy and his brother are basically akinus natural predators . The wg is going to be in for a world of hurt 8f they try to force them to join