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This chapter ended up longer than I planned but I had a lot of fun writing it.

Let me know your thoughts. Remember, feedback is the lifeblood of an author.

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This chapter was edited by Gladiusx and Reiter. That was quite reckless of her. "KARIN!" Karin expected she would lose consciousness when she collapsed, but she was surprisingly lucid. An explosion of chakra came from the stands, followed by someone landing beside her, and Karin found Naruto's ...

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ProfoundMagician

10/10 Chapter. Your version of Saratobi is probably the better ones I've read so far, its really interesting since most people have him be a complete failure who lets Danzo walk over him or super evil I must stay Hokage and in power at any cost. The Karin betrothal is sweet too, unless you plan to add Hinata to the pairing. The bijuu being actual demons and natural disasters is a super neat change too, cant wait for all the other changes you make.

Michael Graham

Does Naruto have any intention of telling Sasuke the truth about Itachi, or Kakashi the truth about Obito? He would need to do his own research to prove it, but I can't imagine Sasuke forgiving Naruto if things go like in canon and he finds out Naruto knew all along.

Platyperry

10/10 Shikamaru might still get his sh*t rocked just on principle when Naruto sees him again lol. Hopefully Naruto can disconnect from the village with Karin at some point, or at least find a way to leverage his position favorably for now

Xodarap4

Why is Google constantly shiting the bed for opening docs now? It says it is protected content and can't be read

Bub3loka

It is protected from copying the text or downloading the file, but you should be able to read it just fine.

Deathknight134

Uhh, for some reason, it won't give me the option to buy the post of ch16 of Light in the Dark. Did you forget to set the thing up or something? I can buy ch17 and ch18, but not 16.

Bub3loka

I don't normally put the chapters available for Pizza Tier on sale. Only those for Shawarma and Steak Tiers as Patreon won't allow me to set a price lower than $3. Ideally, you could join Pizza Tier to gain access to three chapters for all of my stories and purchase the next two chapters. But, if you would rather purchase all the chapters separately, then I can put the chapter for sale for $3. Someone else have mentioned this before so I am tempted to just put all the chapters for sale for $3 except for the Steak Tier at $5