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Published:
2023-02-11 16:22:18
Imported:
2026-06

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Comments

Hado

I think you might be rushing a tad on the transformation & him immediately getting breast orgasms, maybe a slower burn would be better as it feels WEIRD how one sting, and BOOM he's not getting boob orgasms, ya know?

Yuki-chan1156

I liked the pacing of the story, a problem I see with a lot of 3D comics is that they're too slow, and they focus too much on things that aren't relevant to the reader.

Yuki-chan1156

This isn't a criticism, it's more a personal taste. But I preferred that there really was a sex scene between the nurse and the protagonist, while he was sleeping. It wouldn't be relevant for the story, and it would be a nice fanservice