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kaien’s eclipse pt 10 (B) REVISED CHAPTER (Patreon)

Published:
2024-07-20 06:34:20
Edited:
2024-07-20 06:36:13
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2026-06
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HEY GUYS SO i woke up and had the biggest headache over the last night’s post’s structuring and writing so this is the revised one for part 10 before kghn arc ill put a vote after this and pls let me know which one (A or B) reads better to you!!! sob sob this is what happens when you’re working on updates up till 6am 😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫

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Pawtiful

I think both are perfect in their own way! This version has me more in my feels tbh and I kind of feel like you see both Kaien and Tobio a little bit more vulnerable (which I do prefer!) but seriously, both versions are amazing and you're clearly outdoing yourself once again ally!! Love this with all my heart 🥹✨🫂

eli

i love tobio's relationship with karasuno and esp his grandpa. they mean so so much to him. thanks for making me cry in the damn morning

Konichita

I honestly like both! I like the two last pages more in this version but I feel the transition for the first two pages was better in the other version. Idk for me the part where Kaien says "how do you know they are here for me?" Seems a bit misplaced because it kind of doesn't have a precedent in the conversation? Idk if I'm explaining myself 😅 maybe it's the way it was worded.

Sunny

I think that both part are good and provide a different kind of storytelling! This one probably got me a little more emotional than the other though! I also gotta admit that Papayama really heals my inner-child with how carefully he talks to Kaien and helps him out, it’s something I didn’t get the chance to have so it’s really comforting to see and read, that was an amazing update Ally, thank you! ❤️

moon

I'm feeling emotional that Kageyama is thinking about karasuno while saying that 🥺 he was karasuno baby :(( Both versions are really good, the other one seems more desperate on kaiens side, which I can also understand. I think I can see Hinata more in him in version A and Kageyama more in version B, both beautiful

Nana

Both are great, but I think this version is better, even if I can't find the good words to explain why, it's just a feeling...

Maryomaaa

I think Kuroken family will appear in the kagehina arc we all know kenma is shoyo bestie and was visiting him in Brazil before so are we getting kuroken son soon?

Haras

Going back and reading part A part b feels smoother in the way yama speaks with Kaien and how he explains his analogy. It's feels more genuine than part a, of course both were really good and heart felt. I just liked b more

Inna

Can't wait for kagehina arc!!! Love the lead up to it but I do still want to see the naokai progression~ Going to enjoy the kagehina arc in the meantime😍

Nikki Huh

Ahahah really kageyama? A booby trap? 😂

Mai

That little glimpse of Tsukki in your style!! 🥹💖 I always wondered how you would draw him, he's so sweet!

Vanessa N

I love the e subtle change in what Kaien says. I think both reactions are very valid, but I feel like version A flows well with his personality as we’ve come to understand it at this point in the timeline and works well with Tobio’s explanation of finding the right people you feel safe with and the right moment in time.

Neba

Part B feels smoother! It flows a little easier!! Also cannot wait to see the trap, because that was a great response and I’m so excited lol