HIPFC - Style Improvement (Patreon)

You know. I've never tried to go FULL Manga style- because I was always stubborn like... I had to draw my OWN way and not like anybody else. WELL, after thinking about it, I kinda realized no matter how I draw it will look like mine. Some way, some how. So, here's the third panel for strip #50! I actually started with this panel because I wanted to see how I could apply some rules to Yoko's face and hair.

The most difficult part, which I've gotten a handle on now, is keeping that injured look in Yoko's eyes, even when she's being downright brutal!

And no no- Yoko's arms aren't pinned above her. She's standing over Cassandra with her hands up against the empty bookshelf behind her.