The Book Club: Chapter 14 - Page 38 [Pencils & Inks] (Patreon)

This is one of those scenes that I mentioned earlier on really needed a bit more space to play out. I really wanted to get the reaction to Patty noticing Lorraine and Nicole touching themselves. And even though this page restructuring was done to have fewer panels per page and spread things out, I still ended up adding in extras! The small insert panels of Olivia's butt weren't in the revised script, I had it originally just as one big panel of the action, but after sketching it out, there was some space so I felt a couple of close ups would serve well on the right side of the page.