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I know some folks might get mad at me for the swerve here, but I felt like a full on lesbian love making sessions was simply too fast and too out of character here. I pushed it about as far as I felt I could in this first real interaction between these two characters before I felt the need to break it off.

But we're not done with these gals just yet. Still another week of updates still to come to wrap this issue up!

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David Monroe

Your reluctance to rush a plot is what distinguishes you from others. Hannah might achieve some milestones before met mom, but she’s not going to rush it. That’s all on you!

Emmett McMullan

This is a good writing choice, Karmagik. So many eroticists just put a pair of characters in a scene together and there's no pretext, they just go at it. Your writing consistently has resonance and consistency in the cast, especially the Book Club. Their anxieties, their lusts, it all feels grounded. Thanks for your dedication to quality!