The Book Club: Chapter 16 - Page 9 (Pencils and Inks) (Patreon)

I did something I almost never do with this page. I fully redrew the pencils. After I got done with the first version, it just didn't sit right with me. I wanted it to be bigger and bolder and the earlier version (which I've still uploaded for you all to see) just didn't feel like the images of the ladies were grand enough.

So, I came up with a different panel layout. I really wanted big poster type shots of each ladies to really help show how Patty had shifted her imagination from picturing herself as Ovaria to now picturing Olivia in that role instead.

And I also wanted to make sure I got a full body shot of the costume. I wanted a real retro 60s style sci-fi costume for Ovaria's introductory appearance.