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I've made a few edits to Chapter 1 as listed here. These have been updated in the vault archives too. The errors in page 16 in particular have been haunting me for so long, glad to finally have those fixed. :'D Missing navigation links have also been filled in.

Page 2 - Revised the arm IV 

Page 3 - IV revision

Page 5 - IV revision, other art tweaks

Page 6 - IV revision, adjusted Erin's face in last panel

Page 7 - IV revision, minor adjustment to Fayes' belly last panel

Page 13 - Corrected cupboards

Page 16 - Adjusted dialogue, corrected view of the ship, added annotations to Erin's scribbles

Page 18 - Adjusted dialogue

Chapter 2 edits will follow soon, and it will be added to the vault then too!

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