Interlude ( Render 1) — Wisp to RainbowLand (Patreon)

With 12 days left to try to meet my funds — I’ve been so nervous and unable to really focus. So I‘ve really working on my Wisp To Rainbowland Comic. I sent a few day developing and Rewriting the Retelling/Interlude. This will flesh out the comic, explaining how we got where we are , while also introducing the series overall to those new  to Rainbow bright. 

Now this is a Rough draft and im more concerned about, if the People can follow the story and if it’s interesting. I would love feedback on what wouled you want to see more after reading. But beofre making those changes,  I wouldn’t rather want to know does it make sense over all. 

a PDF has been created for you to read over. Let me know what think.