Honorable Discharge - Cover design (?) (Patreon)

I'm still not 100% sold on this as the cover because I keep going back and forth, unable to decide if i love it or if i want something completely different. But I wanted you guys to see it, so you can tell me what you think! 

Things I do like about it --

- bright, easily noticeable 

- delicious skin tones

- simple but very obviously gay

Things I don't like about it

-It's eye level, vs being more dynamic (like birds eye view or worms eye view)

- Stiff?? Kinda stiff.

- Not romantic. It shows the characters personality well, but it IS a romance novel... I'm torn.