After Apocalypsh Mi (Attempts discarded) (Patreon)

The first one I discarded for reasons... because I had already done this scene thousands of times. the second; something bothered me about the interaction of the feet with tiny... I would have to adjust her ankle, but that's part of the job, and the third one didn't immersion me into the scene I wanted, which was something that was close to the viewer...Suggestions or tips I'm all ears!