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This one's a bit of an odd one, I've shown off some of the early notes I've written for updates before, but I realized I never shared my notes for Chapter 9!

Truth be told, I didn't write as many physical notes about Chapter 9 as I did for 8 and the sidequest update- but there's still a couple of fun things here! An early outline of the psychedelia segment and the backstory/emotional hook for Cherry! (With only one censored line!)

I don't write in my physical notebook as much as I used to, so now a lot of my notes and outlines are in text files on my computer. I used to have a habit of deleting my old notes once I was done with a chapter but I've been trying to hold on to them more recently! Sometimes it's fun to see how things changed in development!

That's all I've got for now! Chapter 10 is still chugging along, don't worry!

-F.P.

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eric ortiz

I was kind of hoping Fuscia was sort of evil and eating all of her competition

Da Potatato

Maybe I need new glasses .-.)

Hojo05

I think it was implied she was putting slime girls in the tubes.

Gold

Look forward to whatever you have planned forotherpurposes. I love seeing these character struggle with doing the right thing and also filling up their bellies. Even the jerks in your story like Trixie the lawyer, I loved her character. How she has a reason to hate the princess as she broke her flawless record. You even sympathize with her a little bit because Naomi is defending someone that tried to turn Naomi into an experiment.