Dommy Maid revamp (Patreon)

So I've been mulling over this one specific maid for the past 2 weeks. I want to stay as close to the original as possible, but the posing looks so stiff from the front. I was thinking about just redrawing the whole thing and came up with a sketch w/ a better front pose yesterday. But also, my hands have been cramping a lot cause I've truly been drawing non-stop for like 2 weeks now. 

What do you guys think? Would it be worth it to put in the work for the new sketch?

I'm mostly not looking forward to linearting the frills, but I will do it if y'all want it!