💕7-12 Hidden feeling- Vol3- ENGLISH (sketch) WIP💕 (Patreon)
Published:
2026-04-23 04:26:35
Imported:
2026-04
Content
I want to thank everyone! The narrative is complete, and my beta reader—who is also my friend—was very kind yesterday. Only today did I understand her kind words, because there were parts that weren't entirely clear and were too narrative-driven rather than from a character's perspective.
I was able to polish that part and make it more coherent, so I'll be removing the Spanish section since I've already made several changes. But yes, mistakes help things improve!
Starting on page 13, they'll be playing a fun version of UNO, because I don't have to explain anything else! I'm so glad I don't have to worry about writing where the plot was going anymore, but I apologize for making it so long! It was something I had to explain somehow.