Stray Bullet pg. 27 (redo) (Patreon)

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Part two of Stray Bullet, called Fire in the Rain, can be found HERE. 

Okay me Droogs, so here's the re-written, re-drawn page 27. Still not perfect, but done. It could probably have been split into 2 pages, but this works for me. Like with DAMAGED, I will be going over the entirety tweaking likenesses and such before printing.

What do you think? Does it work better? The old one is HERE if you want to compare.