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A subplot is introduced...

A little turn in tone, but I felt this was a good spot to put it. It didn't actually occur to me until almost done with this page that it makes Doug responsible for something kinda fucked up... regardless of how it turns out. His intentions were good, but, wishes gonna pervert. 


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Michael Thompson

Dave, I've gotto say I'm thrilled by this new story! Everything is on point. Keep up the great work.

Bradley Rader

Very interesting story so far. I have no idea where you're going with this.