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Burial of the Rats pg 13 (Patreon)

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2016-11-26 23:35:00
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2026-06
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One of the toughest panels so far, launching from a seated position into a full speed run isn't easy to portray.  Originally I had some anime/zoom lines in there, but ditched them last minute. I think it reads much better without them.


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TomQ

this is great with the 'zoom lines' - i can feel the panic; and as much as i like chancey, i am secretly hoping for his demise .. :)

TomQ

"without" -- without the zoom lines

Dave Davenport (dogspunk)
>>3127777

At the risk of "spoilers" in a 102 year old story, Chancey tells the story from a past tense. I decided to alter it and make it present tense, to be more exciting. I may ultimately change the ending as well, thanks to this comment of yours ;)