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I might have been going a bit overboard with the cliffs lately. To make up for it, I'll give you the last part of the hearing right now. No

I might have been going a bit overboard with the cliffs lately. To make up for it, I'll give you the last part of the hearing right now. No need to wait until Monday. Enjoy!

The parchment passed from Ezekiel’s hand into the Speaker’s with a rustle that seemed deafening in the absolute silence of the chamber.

Matthian watched, unmoving, as the Speaker hesitated, just a heartbeat too long, before unsealing the ancient document. His fingers trembled slightly, though he fought to conceal it. The weight of a hundred eyes pressed down on him, yet none burned fiercer than the boy’s steady gaze.

The Speaker cleared his throat.

"This document," he announced, voice thin against the brittle air, "is an endorsement… from Sheol Veylor."

A ripple tore through the council.

Not a noise, an instinct. A crackle of terror passed from one lord to the next, faster than thought. Breath caught. Chairs scraped backward against marble. A half-dozen goblets tilted, forgotten in trembling hands.

Matthian felt it settle deep in his bones, a fracture in the natural order, sharp and irrevocable. Even the oldest lords, the ones who had outlived three wars and buried rivals without shedding a tear, blanched at the name that had been spoken.

Sheol Veylor.

The name meant little to the common folk. No songs were sung of him. No tales whispered at winter hearths. His legend existed only in silence, in the missing pages of history, in the places even scholars feared to tread.

But here, among the lords of Tradespire, there was no ignorance.

Every man and woman in the hall knew exactly what that name meant.

The sovereign who reigned not over the living, but over what came after.

Rumored to be the father of all Death Mages, the great teacher, the keeper of all knowledge, the single most ancient being on the entire continent, his existence preceding the birth of any developed country of the current time.

He was the Exarch of Death.

The Speaker’s hands were white around the brittle parchment, his voice thinning under the weight of the words.

"The endorsement states that Ezekiel of Tradespire is recognized under the sovereign authority of Sheol Veylor, ruler of the Deadlands. That is all."

For a moment, the hall became a tomb.

No breath. No movement. Only the slow, creaking protest of ancient beams high above, as if even the building itself was reluctant to bear witness.

And then, as always, it was Lord Fies who broke the silence.

He rose to his feet with theatrical disdain, a smirk curling his lips. His slow clap echoed across the chamber, a hollow mockery of an ovation.

"Bravo," he sneered, voice loud in the paralyzed hall. "Dwarves, elves, beasts—and now the very King of the Dead. Tell me, honored Lords, should we expect the fairy courts next? Perhaps the stars themselves will descend to kiss his feet?"

A few strained chuckles scattered through the Imperial loyalists' ranks, brittle and thin.

Fies wasn't finished.

"And I ask you," he pressed on, voice dripping contempt, "does anyone truly believe this... relic... was penned by Sheol Veylor himself? Or are we all so bewitched we dare not call this madness what it is?"

Matthian didn’t hear the end of it.

He felt it instead.

The wrongness.

It came without fanfare. Without force.

One moment, the air was tense, heavy with insult.

The next, it was hollow.

Lord Fies blinked once. His lips twitched, whether for another barb or from something deeper, Matthian never knew.

Then he swayed.

A slow, almost gentle movement.

And collapsed.

No cry. No convulsion. No violence.

Just the soft, unceremonious thud of a man who had simply… stopped.

Limp. Still.

Dead.

A strangled gasp came from one of the aides near the back. Another Lord half-rose from his chair, only to freeze mid-motion and slowly sink back down, as if sudden movement might invite the same fate. His face had gone bloodless.

Nobody moved.

Nobody spoke.

The vast chamber, so often filled with the thundering echoes of argument and laughter, now felt like a tomb—Silent, oppressive, final.

Even the Speaker stood frozen, the ancient parchment clutched tight against his chest like a desperate talisman against the unseen force that had just claimed a life.

Matthian’s gaze swept the room.

The lords sat rooted to their seats, some staring at Fies’ crumpled form, others avoiding it altogether. Fear hung heavy, clinging to every breath.

And yet, not everyone was paralyzed.

Ezekiel stood as he always had: composed, detached, untouched by the storm he had unleashed. There was no triumph in his eyes, no fear, not even satisfaction. It was as if the death of Lord Fies was no more significant to him than a shift in the wind.

Matthian’s stomach twisted.

A Merchant Lord dying outside of old age was an event that would echo through the annals of Tradespire for a generation. They were not warriors. They did not duel or charge into battlefields. They negotiated. They endured. They built legacies that lasted centuries. Death came for them slowly, as it did for kings and architects.

Not like this.

Never like this.

And yet here they were, bearing witness to something that no amount of gold, law, or influence could stop.

Then, from the dais above, a voice cut through the paralysis.

"The proof is accepted."

Matthian turned his eyes upward.

King Midas stood over them all, his presence like a weight pressing down on the hall. His voice had not risen. He had not barked the words.

He hadn’t needed to.

It was a decree, as absolute and immovable as the bedrock beneath their feet.

Without another word, the King turned his head slightly toward the Messenger at his side—a gesture so small it might have been missed entirely. The Messenger nodded once in return.

And then they were gone.

No sound. No flash of light. No ripple of displaced air.

One heartbeat, they were there; the next, the high seat stood empty, as if the King and his attendants had been nothing more than phantoms passing through a dream. No footprints. No farewell.

Just an absence that seemed to bleed into the walls.

For a long moment, no one moved. The lords sat frozen, like statues carved from fear.

Slowly, with the stiffness of a man forcing himself through a nightmare, the Speaker turned back to the council.

He lifted the parchment once more, his voice regaining a shred of its ritual weight.

"Ezekiel of Tradespire," he declared, the words carrying the force of law itself, "having satisfied all three requirements of the charter, is hereby recognized as a Merchant Lord of Tradespire."

The proclamation echoed through the cavernous hall, filling every corner.

But no one cheered.

No one protested.

No one even breathed too loudly.

The Speaker continued, reciting the formal record from memory:

"As a Merchant Lord, you are entitled to all rights and privileges afforded by the Council. These include: unrestricted, priority access to the teleportation network for all members of your House; the right to maintain residence within the Second Circle; the right to attend, speak, and vote at all sessions of the Council; and the right, if you so choose, to claim a formal House name under the laws of Tradespire."

The words rolled forth, ancient and binding.

And through it all, Ezekiel stood as he had from the beginning—still, patient, utterly unmoved.

Not victorious.

Not triumphant.

Simply inevitable.

It struck Matthian then, not as a passing thought, but as a certainty carved into bone. The outcome, the chaos, the death—none of it had rattled the boy. Not once. It was as if everything that had left seasoned lords pale and trembling had already been accounted for, weighed and dismissed as irrelevant.

For the first time in a long while, Matthian felt like a piece on someone else’s board.

The realization was as bitter as it was terrifying.

For a merchant, knowledge was armor. Preparation was power. To be blindsided so thoroughly, to sit helplessly as events unraveled without even understanding the shape of the hand guiding them, was a humiliation he would not soon forget. Nor would he make the mistake of underestimating the boy again.

Slowly, his gaze found Ezekiel once more.

Crimson hair, eyes of molten gold, a stance unbowed by the crushing weight of an entire council’s judgment.

A shiver ran down Matthian’s spine.

What a monster.

He had met only a handful like this before. Individuals so far removed from ordinary ambition, so utterly alien in their depth, that it made one question whether they were made of the same flesh and blood as everyone else.

Aurelia Thorsten.

Nova Fortuna.

Augustus Geistreich.

Giants of their age. Names that shaped empires, crushed dynasties, bent history itself.

And now, a boy who had barely set foot on the first stones of that path.

But Matthian knew, with a certainty he rarely permitted himself:

If Ezekiel lived long enough, his name would be carved alongside theirs.

For better—

or for far, far worse.

Then, for the first time in a long while, the boy moved.

Slowly, deliberately, Ezekiel lifted his gaze, not toward any living soul, but toward the high seat where King Midas had sat only moments before. His eyes locked onto the empty space, studying not what remained, but the absence itself.

Matthian watched, unsettled.

There was a weight to that look. A private conversation held in silence. As if the boy were turning over some riddle too vast, too complicated, for anyone else to grasp.

Then, Ezekiel smiled.

It was not the smile of a victor.

Nor was it triumphant or cruel.

It was faint, almost invisible, an expression tinged with strange, self-mocking amusement. A crack in the perfect facade he had worn so flawlessly throughout the hearing.

It caught Matthian off guard.

For the briefest heartbeat, the boy looked startlingly human.

And then it was gone.

The mask descended once more, smooth and impenetrable, as if the moment had never existed.

Ezekiel turned his attention back to the Speaker, his voice calm, almost courteous.

"Is my appointment valid as of this moment?"

The Speaker, still pale, straightened and gave a shallow nod. "It is."

Ezekiel dipped his head slightly in acknowledgment.

"Then," he said, his words carrying through the stunned chamber, "as the council is still in session, I would like to exercise my rights and make my first official act as a member."

The Speaker blinked, his brow furrowing. "…What act would that be?"

"The right to establish my own House is afforded to me as a titled Lord, is it not?" he asked, voice steady.

The Speaker, grasping for the comfort of familiar law, nodded quickly. Relief flickered across his features like a drowning man who had found a scrap of driftwood. "It is," he confirmed. "You are entitled to petition for a House name, provided it passes the verification of the Knowledge Keeper and—"

"No need for all of that," Ezekiel interrupted, a faint smile tugging at the corner of his lips. “I already know exactly which name to claim.”

Matthian felt the hair rise on the back of his neck.

That smile was a warning.

Subtle, polite, almost charming, but it set every instinct he had screaming. Chaos was coming. He could feel it gathering behind the boy’s words, as inevitable as the tide.

The boy stepped forward, squaring his shoulders, and when he spoke again, it was not the voice of a youth making a polite request. It was a declaration, solemn, thunderous in its simplicity, spoken with the weight of a man carving his name into history.

"I declare my House to bear the name von Hohenheim," he said, each word striking the chamber like a hammer blow. "From this day forth, I shall be known as Ezekiel von Hohenheim."

The air itself seemed to flinch.

Matthian’s chest tightened.

Of all the names, of all the specters from the past, he could have summoned, he had chosen that one.

And with it, the true storm began.

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Zach J

Awesome conclusion!

Xx xX

Oh shxt!! Saturday upload!! Tyftc! Also kinda figured sheol was an exarch but it is nice that it was confirmed

Thomas

Thanks for the early chapter, just to leave off on a another cliffhanger

Dr.Awkward

Tftc! The cherry on top of successive awesome chapters!

Zebrababies

Read it again, literally gave me the shivers and made my hair raise on my arms and neck at the end lmao, maybe the best chapter you’ve written yet

Sanctum

This conclusion was worth every one of the earlier cliffs. An amazing chapter, a fantastic arc, and prose that was simply breathtaking — vivid, cinematic, and full of restrained power. An absolute pleasure to read.

TheLionOfThePacific

hey hey hey, it was a self reflective thought on the shifting context of media resulting in the complete loss of emotional and pacing qualities intentionally added into the story structure. I mean if it gets us an early chapter then, fuck yeah! But I wasn't complaining...

TheLionOfThePacific

Oh come on bruh, a cliff hanger is when an Author builds tension without resolving it in the chapter. Climax minus resolution. The real cliff hanger would be If he emphasized the name then ended the chapter before Zeke said it. I don't think the single sentence "And with it, the true storm began." counts as a cliff hanger. It's just the set up to the next mini-arc.

TheLionOfThePacific

Also I am guessing that this chapter marks the end of this "book"? It seems to me to be a clean wrap up of the last few arcs and the start of a new one.

Buck

Very, very well written arc! The 4 chapters of this arc flow together in a seamless whole. It puts Ezekiel front and center before the Lords of Tradespire and demonstrates just how powerful he already is and hints strongly at how powerful he will ultimately become. The Lord of the Dead reaching out and killing that lord who questioned the authenticity of his letter supporting Ezekiel is the perfect touch to close out the arc! Well done! TFTCs!

Jonas Abraham

Oh my god thank you so much for shortening our suffering :D

Flipper

Christmas just came early this year

atgongumerki

it could also have been King Midas who killed the dude so the King of the Dead does not come down upon the city (which would be hilarious) Somehow I feel like it was a natural law written on the paper itself

atgongumerki

It was mentioned that he has a skill that only exarchs and above have that domain/dominion supression thingy and he might still be further up the ladder of power without anyone knowing

Bryn

Thanks for the chapter! Nice flex from Zeke at the end there!

Xx xX

You right!! I forgot about that cuz I was more focused on the letter part.

Storyflower

No, the most logical in my opinion is that the endorsement was a warning against overreach to Midas himself. Midas already understood that the moment it was revealed. Lord Flies and possibly other Arkanheim pundits not so much or weighing one bad against another. Not following Geistreich instruction might have been no option for Lord Fies. This was another message. To the Geistreich family this time. I wonder if the author perhaps made Ezekiel a bit too untouchable this time.

Storyflower

There is now a clear stand off between Sheol and the Geistreich clan. Is Sheol so disturbed by Augustus' plans, that he is undoubtedly aware of, that even he decided to pick sides?

Bryn

I read it that it is more that he is pro Zeke, not so much that he is anti Augustus. He even said to Zeke when they met that he wasn't passing judgements on who is right or wrong with the conflict, and that if he wanted to stop Augustus he would simply kill him. My guess is he wants Zeke to rise to propogate the conflict further. More conflict = more death, that sort of thing.

Mr. Iron

And Zeke has reclaimed his name. Time for the false heir to be introduced and set on a collision course.

Vamsi Yerraguravagari

One thing I do not understand is why the death mage is so interested in zeke. Is it because he is going to cause a lot of deaths in the future. If so, why . Even without zeke everyone is going to die someday. Why zeke causing a lot of deaths sooner or later is of interest to the death mage or death god unless there is a bigger reason in play here.

Bryn

My theory is he is trying to push to the Monarch level and a big influx of deaths could help facilitate this in some way.

Storyflower

I can see that, but still I can also see the snubbing of the Arkanheim scion as a statement. Since the author liked your post, I guess I'll have to concede... ;-)

Temp Email

Who’s Nova Fortuna again?

AbnormOwl

Or it cold be that Augustus is creating problems that he can't abandon his post to solve. If he is a death mage he might have sensed or known about Zeke's foray into the ancient city. Knowing that Zeke chose to destroy it rather than let Augustus learn how to control souls would be a mark in his favor.

Nikolai Beckel

The fortuna family are those fate mages born at archmage, I think they have some form of power over probability

Jar Jar Bingus

At the scale Sheol works at, I doubt he's trying to support Zeke in order to cause more death. Sheol's lived for millennia, a few centuries can pass and it'd be the same amount of death. Additionally, larger populations result in more death overall anyway (assuming the same life expectancy/rate of death per capita, a population of 1 billion will have a higher number of people dying each year than a population of 10000), so if even if mass death somehow benefits Sheol, he'd benefit more from letting the population grow.