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chimeraz

------SPOILER------ OK all in all I have to say you did a really good job when you put all parts together. I was a little concerned how you would corrupt each other because I didn't expect them to be locked apart from each. With Aubree and Neveah you did a really great job, especially with Aubree, and Everly doing the finishing touch wonderful. The bad ending is good and the director in the end is a nice little detail. The only con is the part with Naomi. I really hope you didn't cut off because you felt the need to rush because you tought it took you too long for the last chapter, especially because you used more time for Vivian, ok story wise it made sense. All in all it was good. appreciate the two ending options. Personally would have enjoyed it when the others were a little bit more involved in corrupting the others that were left, but then again Vivian participated and I would guess you didn't want to do that because they were still reluctant even when corrupted. In the end I would have wished for the others to gang up on Naomi and break her for Vivian to finish it off. But still really enjoyed it.