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Jack is assigned to the Rebirth Breeding project and went to Legoshi to see if he would like to offer himself up as future dog batter. After a series of misunderstandings and one-sided communications it seems like everything and everyone is slipping right into place!

Version 2 has the prey and pred swapped with different context.

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icyhugs

Absolutely loved it. Can't wait for the second version.

icyhugs

Just going to leave some suggestions if you are having trouble with making the second version be more different than the first. Take or leave them at your own discretion. 1. The first version of the story had a semi-willing prey who was kind of in a drunken like haze, maybe you could go full willing or full unwilling. Maybe if he is willing, he wants to be a wolf because in the cannon he looks down upon his own heritage, with his species being the result of artificial tinkering with wolf DNA. I can't think of a good reason why Legoshi would want him in an unwilling situation besides just generally protecting him or having a strange feeling that Jack is a part of his pack/family and he wants to make it more official. 2. Could make it same size cock vore instead of micro/macro cockvore. 3. Could involve other characters, maybe if it was an unwilling scenario Bill or another character wants Jack, not because they really want him but as a way to take him away from legoshi and hurt him emotionally thus Legoshi cockvores Jack as a way to prevent the other character from getting him. Anyway, thanks for reading.