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Hi guys,

Here is Chapter Seventy Two.

As always, please do take the time to give me your feedback. It means a lot to me.

Enjoy.

Regards,

BlaQQuill.

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In the end, Olivia had been forced to first offer up a tier-seven charm that would render one nigh invisible to all scrying, divination, and fate-tracking. It seems that this should be Alena, not Olivia.

Dennis Banfield

Another solid chapter! I appreciated the ‘collateral’ that you wrote in for the ‘loan’ of high-tier magical equipment, it seems like a good way to use the magical shop without violating the agreement. I’m surprised that using the magical floating platform didn’t give more of a headache to Greg, given his connection to the earth being so suddenly cut off caused him quite the trouble earlier! Whether that’s because he expected it, or because he’s a higher level mage now, is up in the air (ba dum tss). It also remains to be seen when Greg steps foot on the Abyssal tainted soil, whether or not he will be able to use his earth connection/abilities at all. Given that in the town, the earth seemed to be ‘screaming in agony’, I’d say it’s likely that this Abyssal tainted earth might even fight Greg when he attempts to command it! Looking forward to what happens next :D

BlaQQuill

Thank you so much Dennis. It's feedback like this that helps me grow as a writer. I really do appreciate the time you took to write it out. I hope to keep putting out high quality chapters and my readers sharing their thoughts with me like this really helps me see the story from a new perspective. It means a lot to me, thanks man.