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Hi guys.

Here is Chapter Two.

Thanks for all the help. It means a lot to me.

Regards,
BlaQQuill.

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λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs

#46, can can change as to a . Or add a comma after explanations : (offer explanations. When Greg looked) . I would do a period to shorten the sentence.

λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs

#52 doesn't need a comma here: just because the system asked him to do something(,) didn’t mean that it was a good idea to do it. Should add a comma here, remove into: whether it was worth it(,) but also (into) how to go about