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The Sixth School. Chapter 018. (Patreon)

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2023-05-31 07:53:57
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Hi guys,


Here is Chapter Eighteen.


As always, please do take the time to give me your feedback. It means a lot to me.


Enjoy.


Regards,

BlaQQuill.

Comments

Murky

Think this sentence is missing a word: "Unfortunately for the bisons, their for was underground." And should bellow be bellowed here? "As such, even though they were worked up and ready for a fight, all they could do was impotently paw at the ground while they bellow in indignation."

BlaQQuill
>>109687091

Sorry about that first error. It's the autocorrect on my phone. Although foe is a legitimate word, it usually changes it to 'for' and I don't know why. With the second correction, I think both tenses can apply.

Murky

Hope I'm not being annoying with the corrections. I have to say you sure are making our guy's first boss battle a bit tougher than expected!

BlaQQuill
>>109687708

Believe me when I tell you that your corrections are VERY MUCH appreciated. I try to edit my work to the best of my ability, but as you can see I don't always catch everything. To have a second pair of eyes look over my work and point to me what I've missed is just godsent as far as I am concerned.