Joyce/Dorothy, working through some shit through pencils (Patreon)

okay, joyce pencils were good, but all right we gotta shove a dorothy in there somewhere, and i like the anatomy pretty strongly, so it's gotta be a somehow not-too-obscuringy dorothy

so i take the pencils, shrink and move 'em around, add a dorothy and some grinding

a step in the correct direction, bit of a dead end ultimately, but thought i'd show you this false middle anyway