Joyce/Walky "Notty!" redrawn panel, re-re-penciled (Patreon)

Figured out what was throwing me.  The original pose, as drawn, was untenable!  The intersection of legs and legs and crotches and legs wasn't precisely allocating to real physical space.  If Walky's butt is on the ground, Joyce's thighs need to aim forward rather than back -- of course once you do that, you start obscuring Walky's butt, which I'm trying not to do, because I'm kind.  And so I'm foreshortening Joyce's legs forward towards us instead.  That's the solution.  Her right shin now directs behind her away from us.  I think I got it solved.tl;dr: thighs