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UPDATED WITH A THIRD FINAL PANEL!

Buying new clothes on ebay can be a frustrating experience. This tartan dress looked good in the photos but in reality, it was horribly uncomfortable and scratchy. I couldn't bear to wear it for more than 10 minutes, so that's why I only appear in half the panels of this comic!

This is definitely a one and done outfit - you won't be seeing it again. If anyone wants to buy a third-hand itchy dress, do let me know :)

I'd like to hear your feedback on the final panel. I've uploaded two versions here and I can't decide which one works best. I like the second cartoony version where my body literally disappears, but it also looks like I've transformed into a chair... Which do you prefer?

Tots x

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Antonio C. Paulo

I would say the second one fits better, as your character experienced lots of comedic and cartoonish moments/situations (for ex. your transformation at the end of "Queen of the Sea", your greenish "I have to vomit" face on your Christmas comic and so on), so this gives this unexpected and comedic effect to it. As for the first final panel I would title it "the alternative one" 😉👍

Zachary Taylor

I think that removing the body entirely is too much :( could maybe do a cartoonish outline of your figure with the flat fabric pattern to make it stand out better? :)

Anon

Hah the second one is funny but could maybe blend better if it was translucent

Anon

The new one works great 😆