Take Me Away Page Thirteen WIP #2 (Patreon)

It took me a hot minute to figure out how I want to do the layout of this page, and there was a draft where there was a LOT more heavy breathing bubbles to emphasize Stolas' breath getting faster... but let me know what you think, is this a good momentum? Does this feel like Stolas falling deeper into submission?

Blitz's fingers are working their magic 💫