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Lynn

  • Redemption - Lynn gives up her plans and genuinely tries to become a better person. 24
  • Vanquished - Lynn is foiled by the group and kicked out of the house. 24
  • Conquered - Lynn is foiled and made the group's servant. 85
  • Victorious - Lynn ends the harem, and gets her way (likely temporarily). 1
  • 2024-10-01
  • 134 votes
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After reading chapter 30, there was some discussion about Lynn's future, and I'm curious to know what the majority opinion is.

If you haven't read chapter 30 yet, go read that first, then vote on this.

 

In your opinion, what arc would you like to see Lynn undertake?

In the case of an arc not being mutually exclusive, just pick whichever one you'd prefer most.

Feel free to comment, explain your choice, etc.

Also, this is not a binding thing saying I'll do whatever wins. I'm curious to see what you, the readers, want though.

Comments

BreakerMouse

Redemption or conquered, I think she is getting enough build up to be part of the harem in some way. I’m fine with her being the conquered servant bitch but that does get a bit NC for some.

John Henry

Given all the work that has gone into her I don't see her disappearing but not sure how conquered would work....she is so manipulative I would think it is just a plot.

Arx563

I'm all about redemption but then she shouldn't be joining the Harem at all. Forgiving someone doesn't mean you have to tolerate them in your life. So if she is ends up being redemed than she should leave the story completly and I'm not sure how people would be feeling about that.

Austin verm

Same on redemption or conquered

David (Dobie) Gillis

While I appreciate some of the folks that want Lynn to become a part of the harem (even the lowest member, so to speak), I just can't see Arthur aaccepting that outcome. He does see sex as a personal interaction and there is no way he would ever form even a social bond with her. Additionally, with the damage she did to him, basic tolerance is more than she deserves.

Damien Osborne

I voted for redemption, but I like the idea of her being conquered beforehand but regardless of those two outcomes, there should be a serious talk with Arthur.

Mdmays1987

I voted for conquered but would be equally happy with redemption But with a lot of the stuff mentioned in the last chapter I'm not sure how realistic it would be although Arthur seems like a better person than me so maybe I'm wrong

Arx563

Arthur might not be involved. Kelly could be in charge of Lynn and the girls will get a pussy muncher who's also into humiliation...

anon Bluetailedfinch

While I think 3 could be really sexy from that fantasy Lynn already had. Now knowing the backstory of her and Arthur makes me feel like incorporating her would do nothing but harm the rest of the dynamic of the harem. There is already a lot I see coming for them. I hope we're going to get something like the last chapter for Rani for everyone. There are so many interpersonal issues on deck, Mindy isn't really being seen (take for example love of football that no one knows and her family) Selene never taking her collar off and turning the game off. There's so much good stuff there, I feel like Lynn if brought to the fold can only take away from it all rather than add.

Bruce W

Definitely voting conquered cuz for that to happen it has to involve some level of redemption too unless you are going the full on noncon route. I think for her to improve, then redeem herself as the lowest member of the harem would be a great arc. Trust Arthur can be earned through time, meanwhile she could be handled by Kelly and Rani no problem. I think the dom side of rani was built nicely for her

Jonathan

I would love to see her completely broken. A servant that would happily lick her master's feet if ordered to do so. She would have to be completely exposed as an horrible person with no one to bail her out for genuine redemption and I don't see that being a guarantee for positive changes on Lynn's part. The ultimate revenge would be to get her to admit that she lied about the attempted rape on camera or something like that. Arthur definitely deserves that type of justice.

David (Dobie) Gillis

So, to add, I would prefer vanquished or redeemed. Lynn winning (even temporarily) just seems so ... unfair and Lynn serving the group just seems so destabilizing for Arthur.

Multi-life Jumper

Conquered and Redeemed (possibly in opposite order). Agree with many parts of the other responses. Love this story for the characters, the development, and relationships, but the very important part of it revolving around sex and trust/power dynamics wants for the the woman who has been explicitly noted as incredibly attractive, if not the most attractive, to be involved. Just not in a way that rewards bad behavior nor that Arthur loses himself in anger or morality, so both Conquered and Reddemed. Not easy to write while still seeming genuine, but or course we leave that to you. What ever way I'm sure the story will be great in it's own way.

saffy

I love a well told redemption arc so I think that gets my vote. Whilst conquered would be hot (thanks Rani), I don’t think it works for this story in that I feel it would be stretching credulity a bit too far. That’s not to say she couldn’t play it during a scene as a way to demonstrate how contrite she is, but I can’t see a believable route to full-time house slave. But feel free to prove me wrong :)

SathurnFox

I think the same only way "conquered" works is for Lynn's plans to fail in such a way that she is left emotionally vulnerable and at the mercy of the harem. For example she ropes in another guy for whatever her plan is and almost gets raped and the only help she can get is the harem? The way it has been written the only way see it working for Lynn to be in an emotionally dark place, trapped by her own actions, with Kelly her only salvation. I think you can use any of the girls to find her, but Kelly and Selene are the keys.

Trey

You do a phenomenal job of showing her switchiness and inability to reconcile her submissive side. Her dominant side is overweaning and destructive and the more she tries to be in control, the worse she hurts everyone. Breaking that down entirely in surrender feels like the natural conquering/redeeming arc. She doesn't come out the other side what she came in as. I want to see you explore the root of Lynn's shift from his friend to his tormentor, from her perspective. Build up the mythology in her head. Also, I think any of her acceptance and redemption to the group should be led by Kelly and Selene. She underestimates Selene and who better to teach her the nature of service as her repentence?

Flamethrow

I want to see her vanquished and out of their lives, because from everything we know of her so far, not only in relation to the harem but her entire life history, she has not shown any capacity or desire to improve and become a better person.