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arkjohnson

小剧场精彩程度不亚于正篇故事

sa m sa m

能不能保留他们的思想,却强迫听指令的功能啊?

Zheng Yang

sam这个提议很有意思啊!NTR的变形?哈哈哈

Dominique

What a nice surprise! Great great scene.

Your_Big_Fan

Thanks for the update. Olivia is astonishing in the cage harness. I am wondering if you could give her a collar and a mask so she will be more mysterious and etroic.

ExG

Great stuff! My one critique for this and EP04 is that Shirley and Olivia's eyes should glow green when the programming is effecting them. But hot stuff regardless!

Your_Big_Fan

I feel that these two short stories have great potential to be expanded into longer chapters. For instance, having Olivia wear a mask and nipple pasties, slowly developing from foreplay, and then seductively reducing her attire could perhaps add more tension to the later sex scenes with the gangs, making the story more substantial. This is just my humble suggestion, thank you!