"Witch's Critters" - Rat and Mouse Transformation Story (Patreon)

Man into Male Rat and Man into Male Mouse Transformation Story | SFW (Still as all of my stories its for adults only.) | Nudity (Without Descriptions of It)

Arthur and Adam were good friends and currently coming back from a concert. It was late evening, already dark and somewhat moody. The concert was intentionally set up in the wilderness and two friends didn’t mind it. Still because of that they had some kilometres to pass until they’d reach the nearest bus stop. They spent the time on chatting, admiring the nature around and making occasional photos.

They were about to reach the bus stop, but had to pass a small forest first. They knew about it from the other concert attenders and obviously their Google Maps. “Shit… I lost the signal, but at least we’re heading in the right direction. It’s an easy way out of the woods.” – Said Adam as he put the phone in his pocket resigned. “Yeah and I have low battery, let’s speed up…” – Replied Arthur. “Man, we could’ve booked a camping spot… It wasn’t that ex- Arthur, behind you!” – Adam suddenly exclaimed startled and pointed a finger at something. “Huh, the hell? Oh shit!” – Arthur realised what his friend meant. A cryptic woman stared at the two from a few metres distance. She wore ruined traditional clothing of native Americans and cackled silently. Two of the friends immediately started backing away from her.

The elderly woman, already noticed gave up on hiding and jumped out of the bushes like a mad person. “Don’t fret little mice. It won’t hurt you much to answer my questions, will it? Hehee…” – The woman cackled again and started walking fast in circles around the two men. Arthur and Adam were obviously unsettled by the situation, but there was two of them and only one mad woman. If she had anything suspicious on mind, they would easily fend her off. “What do you want Miss…?” – Asked Adam as he gestured Arthur to calm down. “Good sonny! That’s the spirit. Now seriously, the major question is… Why do you trespass my domain?” – Asked the witch with mixed emotions all over the sentences. “W-We’re coming back from a concert, b-but we’re all about nature! Like you, we value it. Some funds from the concert will support reforestation amongst other things!” – Adam tried to manipulate the woman into letting them go in a peaceful manner. Arthur on the other hand was getting annoyed, it’s none of the woman’s business to know what they were doing here. “Hm… Is that so? You’re defiant to the reality we face nowadays, where humans try to devastate everything natural…? Hm… Impressive, maybe I shall let you go safely after all… One more question – Despite our times, will you live with the respect for the nature…?” – The woman monologued and asked as she started to act less demented and more wise than anything.

Adam scratched his chin thinking of a solid answer to end this conversation and to satisfy the witch. Meanwhile Arthur slowly pulled out his phone without Adam and the witch noticing. “Me and my friend try our best to live with the respe- Arthur no!” – Adam exclaimed as he noticed Arthur making a photo of the woman with a flash. It was too late, the bright light blinded the witch who was acting calm and tactful until now. “Gaaaah! You pathetic brats, I knew you were no different than all the mutts humanity spews out nowadays… That does it…” – The witch screamed in amok and started making weird gestures. Green mist started to pull out of the earth and onto her open hands. “Arthur you fuckin’ idiot, I was about to talk her into letting us go!” – Adam yelled at his friend. Arthur shrugged, but started to get uneasy as he noticed the weird magic the witch started to awaken. Both of the men started trembling, but after a quick glance at each other they broke into a run.

The witch shook her head slowly with her eyes closed. “I thought you were different than the rest, but you only care about yourselves. You deserve no better than to become parts of the primal nature yourselves! Critters, rodents, mice shall you be…!” – She invocated and thrown her hands in the direction of the escaping men. The mist shoot out of her grasp and chased the escapees. “Calm the fuck down Adam, we’re almost out of the woods! Loo-aaaagh…!” – Arthur exclaimed in pain as he got hit by the green mist. Adam shook his head and gasped as he got hit by the mist as well as was expected by him. They were doomed because of Arthur’s mistake mainly. Both of them collapsed onto the forest floor. The witch didn’t chase them, but slowly started walking towards them.

The magic started working on the men’s bodies already. They didn’t hear the woman’s words and had no clue what the magic would do to them. Their bodies started to tingle, then gradually itch all over. “A-Arthur, y-your hand…!” – Gasped his friend. Arthur’s fingertips were pierced by growing claws, from the wrists and up dense brown hair started to sprout. “F-Fuck! What did she do to us…?!” – Arthur groaned as his entire body started to ache and crack. He was changing faster than Adam. His spine ached and started to grow longer, putting a pressure on his tailbone. Before he was able to do anything his tailbone unfused and a rope-like tail started to extend from above his rear. It slithered out of his pants and wriggled with each growth spurt. Adam stared at his friend in disbelief – She was turning them into simple rodents…

“Adam! D-Don’t just sta-aaaaghre! Help m-meaaaah…!” – Arthur groaned in pain as his entire body started to shudder, with each movement his entire silhouette seemed to shrink. Arthur looked around himself in panic seeing how everything was getting bigger, from his perspective as he was the one shrinking. His wormy tail just finished extending and was practically as long as the rest of his body. “T-This is i-impossible… I h-have a t-tail…!” – Arthur complained defeated and grabbed his furless tail. He felt it’s distinct texture, its twitches of movement and even the touch itself – It was his body’s new extension. Adam just watched the scene unfold in disbelief, he felt like his body was transforming as well, but slower – His human hair was getting replaced by the growing grey fur.

Arthur was half of his previous size at this point and still shrinking painfully. He was forced into a more hunched over position as his back crunched and became mostly adapted for quadrupedal life. His clothes were baggy on him. The desperate man started to crawl out of his clothing and it all came off of him individually in seconds until he was left naked and trembling, occasionally glancing back at Adam towering above him. Arthur felt his human hair fall out in clumps, immediately replaced by the brown fur he’ll grow for the rest of his short life. He heaved as his torso cracked and became more rounder, his stomach protruded a bit more than usual. His limbs cracked violently and readjusted, so did his pelvis and shoulder blades. His feet popped and elongated while also growing claws and staying furless like what used to be his hands.

“Hyeeeeek…!” – He squeaked and clutched his face in panic. He held it tight, but despite his meek efforts his face started to morph into a snout and then painfully push out into a mouse muzzle. Whiskers pierced the sides of it. His paws still held his altering maw, until he started to cough. He jerked his paws away and spat his human teeth out. By now Arthur was tiny, the size of a common house mouse and looking like it too for the most part. The remnants of his humanity disappeared off his face. His eyes bulged out, became darker and beadier. His gums ached as they were pierced by resilient, but compact incisors and molars fit for a rodent. He squeaked in pain as his large incisors pierced the front of his mouth cavity. His already disfigured ears thinned down and became rounder counterparts of a mouse. Slowly his changes finished their job, Arthur’s painful transformation into a mouse was over. Adam gulped and presumed with dread that his transformation would be just as painful. Arthur ran around and stopped from time to time looking at his altered extremities, his tail and even staring at his muzzle cross eyed. He gave one surprisingly loud squeak of despair before running off into the woods.

“Arthur don’t go! Don’t leave me…!” Adam shouted for his mouse turned friend. Did Arthur even retain his mind? Was he that depressed because of his new form that he just ran away in shame from everything, even his friend…? Adam sighed resigned, as he felt his own transformation speed up. His body crunched and started to shrink, his clothes were getting loose on his body. So far the changes weren’t painful, but they were bizarre. Adam started undressing while he was still able to, especially as he realised that his entire body was already covered in grey fur. Grey? Also it seemed courser than the fur Arthur grew. Adam shrugged as he got completely naked. He positioned himself onto all fours and as a rationalist thought of his options. Maybe he would be able to convince the witch into changing him back somehow…?

 Adam shrank a lot, he was circa half of his original size. Every bush around him has gotten bigger, he was slowly shrinking and descending into the tall grass. His spine tingled, but didn’t hurt much surprisingly. Why wasn’t he suffering like his friend? Still Adam felt and heard his spine pop with each jolt of transformative energy. A tension appeared in his tailbone until it started to stretch his flesh and growing out. Slowly a wriggling tail nub appeared, it segmented and grew additional bone and flesh tissue as it lengthened. His torso gained a more streamlined and rounder shape, more adequate for a rodent he was becoming. Another difference from his changing body and Arthur’s was his tail. Adam grabbed his lengthening appendage and realised it was covered in very thin and short mossy fur. His tail slowly reached its final length and seemed a bit thicker than Arthur’s. Was he becoming a different species of mouse?

Adam felt tingling in his head and he realised it started to change. It started to slope down with subtle throbbing. His eyes underwent a similar pair of changes like his friend, becoming darker and beadier. His ears thinned down and grew rounder. His nose and mouth started to push further away from the rest of his morphing face. His nose became way smaller and compact, but also more sensitive. Whiskers pierced his increasingly furry cheeks. His muzzle slowly finished forming and it seemed slightly more blunt than that of Arthur. Instead of falling out Adam’s teeth morphed and tingled inside his mouth as they shifted into their rodent counterparts. Most notably his incisors became bigger in comparison to the rest of his teeth. His human hair got replaced by the grey fur that covered his entire body at this point. Adam’s legs became digitigrade and his feet more elongated and tipped with sharp claws. His hands remained relatively dextrous, although they became paws with contours of pads. The last changes shrank him into his final size, which also seemed to differ from that of Arthur. Arthur became smaller.

All of this puzzled Adam. He realised he stopped changing and started to examine his body. He became a rodent alright, but maybe not necessarily a mouse… He looked back at his tail, touched his muzzle. He wasn’t any specialist, but he realised with certainty at this point that he became a rat. Suddenly his rat ears perked up and Adam turned in the direction the noise came from. Thumping of massive feet only reminded him of his new size. Adam wanted to run away from the danger, but he realised the thumping came from a familiar silhouette. The witch came over to Adam and crouched in front of him. “… That’s what you get for befriending such an insolent imbecile… Though… You really did act like you cared about the nature, your earlier speech was honest – I sensed that. Therefore I give you a choice. You can either chase your friend and live a tough life as a rat in the wilderness or you can be my familiar. Jump onto my hand if you choose me…” – The witch explained and extended her arm towards Adam the rat. Adam felt like there was no good choice for him – He wanted to change back into a human. Though he would never be able to if he’d just run away to look for his friend. Adam squeaked and jumped onto the witch’s hand, hoping she would change him back into a human one day. As for Arthur, he had a tough life ahead of him..