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Been working on this project here and there and wanted to drop another little teaser.

Reminder that none of these characters are mine and you should go check out the original stories this is an extension of. It's for fun and entertainment.

This is a small portion from the first chapter, completely unedited and unpolished.

Enjoy!

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A soft creak from the stairs pulled Bill from his thoughts as he put the last of the ice cream in the freezer. Shutting the door he turned and saw Amber standing at the foot of the stairs. If his erection had been bothering him before it was worse now.

Amber was nearly naked, the only thing on a very thin pair of yellow string thong panties that were so sheer he could see every contour of her pussy… and the very sticky big wet spot seeping into the material. His wife stood confident and straight-backed, walking into the kitchen, her tits bouncing, the nipple piercings glittering in the overhead lights. Her steps bright her right up to Bill and her eyes were hard and dismissive. “Could you move please? I need to get us some drinks.”

“Uh…uh okay.” Bill stammered and stepped back, eyes still on her beautiful tits, her skin shining with a thin layer of sexual sweat, hair pulled back in a messy blonde ponytail.

“Stop looking at my tits, Bill. You haven’t earned that right.” Amber said sternly, turning to the fridge and pulling the door open, looking quickly for where Bill had put the beer and then with exaggerative flair, bent down at the waist, ass sticking out, cheeks opening to reveal the thin yellow string between her cheeks and a shining circular base of a butt plug that had a large letter J stamped into the steel. Around the little handle that was sticking out, there was a slick thick smearing of what Bill thought might be lube but… it looked more like a mixture of cum and spit…

It was clear Amber was showing this to Bill on purpose. She’d been sent to tease him, and not just that… the fact that the butt plug was branded… well that was as close to actually branding Amber as you could get without actually doing something bodily altering. It didn’t look like one of the bigger ones she’d used to help train her asshole, but it was big enough and her ass was gripping it tighty as she wiggled her hips, grabbing three beers and then standing back up and slamming the fridge door.

Without a word she turned away from Bill and stared back to the stairs, ass swaying and tits jiggling as if it were no big deal she was so exposed. It was a far cry from the person Amber had been all those months ago before Jack had come into their lives.

Bill stared at his wifes ass, thinking how that plug was there… that it was basically branded for Jack.

“Amber?” Bill’s voice cracked and he cringed at his own pathetic sound.

His wife stopped at the stairs and looked back at him, that hard and blank look still plastered on her face. “Yes?”

Swallowing the lump in his throat, Bill made himself croak. “Do you love me?” How pathetic was he that he was already questioning things. This whole weekend had barely gotten started and he was already feeling utterly and completely jealous and worried.

The look on Amber’s face softened immediately. “I love you so much, Bill. Always.” She said it softly. Gave him a quick wink and blew him a kiss. Then she turned and vanished back upstairs.

Comments

Tombstone23

Evil Amber is sooo hot! Though I am a bit surprised Bill is already worried and nervous tbh. I’ve always felt like their relationship is extremely strong, especially if they’ve been enjoying this lifestyle for a while now.

Vivian White Writes Erotica

This is definitely subject to change a bit. I want to get the characters right so there's gonna be a little learning curve for me. But that's a good note so I'll keep it in mind as I work on this 🙂

Tombstone23

Yeah that definitely makes sense! Another thought I had was that Bill wasn’t often described as feeling pathetic, at least not more than just being way turned on. I’m excited to see more of Ambers naughty side and being dismissive of Bill, i always thought Evil Amber persona is in contrast to how the real Amber actually feels was so hot. She just loves getting Bill all hot and bothered hahaha Not trying to be rude or critical either, just to make sure you know that I’m just excited and sharing thoughts 😊 it’s probably my all time fav story in the genre. I’ve read it a well over a hundred times, I go back on it multiple times a week. Sooo I’m just excited and eager and think about it a lot 😅 I will try to not be annoying as you post updates haha

None

Looks to be tremendous…I do love the subtle way you are changing the characters…when will this chapter be done? Also I hope it isn’t dominated by anal

Vivian White Writes Erotica

Can't make a promise on the delivery time since this is more a passion project then one I'm fully committed to. But I will do my best to make sure it's not a super long time. Maybe a month or so. And I'm not big on anal so it won't be a dominant theme.

FU

Well, well what do we have here, a nervous Cuck and a Hot Wife taking liberties rubbing it in his face. Bill being insecure about what is happening, already questioning her love, not knowing what is happening. Has he been banished from the bedroom, is he now not allowed to be wittiness to the action, after all that’s part of a cockolding process getting to watch and maybe participate some. I think maybe Amber is leaving him out in order to see how far she can extend the boundaries of what he will not only tolerate, but accept as his place in her world.

Tombstone23

Maybe! Over the course of the series Amber definitely thinks of and internalizes how much she loves Bill and turning him on by being slutty and Evil Amber, and in previous chapters she’s been curious how far they can all push things. I still think Amber loves Bill more than anything, and would be very surprised if she looses genuine respect for him in that way, Bill has always felt irreplaceable for her and is by no means a slouch in the bedroom. When she’s with Jack she often gets just as turned on thinking about Bill watching and being denied as much as Bill and her fucking. She’s got a whole weekend to tease and torment her husband and dive into their fantasy, not sure if that’s would turn into the norm after it’s all over with. It’s definitely going to be a hot weekend!

Tombstone23

Definitely try to be constructive if there is any feedback to be given! Grown to be a big fan of your style and with how much I love Neighbor Chronicles I’m very excited to see what you cook up. I’m sure there’s a lot of pressure, is a popular series haha

Dean

Don't understand why he would let himself feel this way. Why would not just be he in, if he pays the bills why is he letting another run his house and letting him dictate what's happens. I thought when couples do this they did it together, if he's already wondering if she still loves him, then he must not be enjoying it. I thought that was the purpose of her doing this was for both to get off on it . Not for one to enjoy it and rub it their face while kicking them out of the room.

Tombstone23

You definitely make some good points! From the OG and the follow up alternate universe where she’s picking up from, Bill definitely likes Amber being all wicked and teasing and denying him. She wanted to deny him this for this whole weekend trip, but knowing Amber she would only do it if she was fully confident it would be a massive turn on for Bill, and then likely (and probably what Amber really wants after getting Bill so worked up) they’d go crazy for each other once the weekend is over. I do think Bill feeling pathetic and worried about the security of their marriage is out of character for him. Amber is going to tease and denying him to get him worked up, a dynamic they both enjoy, so I would have assumed he’d be very into what’s happening, or else Amber and him wouldn’t be doing this weekend fantasy escapade. It feels more like Bill if he’d be into it, even if he was briefly out of the room while Amber fucked Jack and Stacey.

Near River

Love this, I really like when Amber becomes dominant and more dismissive of Bill. It comes from a loving relationship that they both have and they have enough trust between them for Amber to act like this

Tony Midwood

I enjoyed reading it but like one of the comments said. After everything Bill has been through I think you need to make him a bit stronger. He gets excited by this not scared. If anything he should be encouraging amber to get back to Jack. I would of preferred jack teasing Bill by him never seeing Amber the whole time. He can only hear her. However he does get to see a lot of Stacey. The marks on her ass cum on her face. Maybe even handcuffs. Could you imagine what would be going through Bill's mind about his wife. Remember Jack's health isn't very good so he's had to bring those of toys and sometimes Jack is watching Amber and Stacey. That would be really weird for them being best friends and working together. They use to tell eachother their most intimate secrets. Maybe in the future Bill and Stacey come best friends. And he finds out more happened than what amber told him?

Tony Midwood

You know what would be exciting. What if as a test bill said the safe word. Just to see if Amber would stop. Not in front of the others just to Amber herself maybe she's going to the toilet and Bill catches her. You have to remember that they both like to tease each other. I mean I could picture Amber going back into the room with Jack and Stacey closing the door what would she say to them ? Would she come back out? Maybe Jack would send Amber out to try to convince him or maybe he would send Stacey out. Or maybe they pack their stuff and Amber can hear Stacy getting fucked hard and she's jealous giving Bill the evil eye. And then Bill starts laughing and Amber realises he's got his own back. Instead of calling Jack and asshole she can call it bill. Because I think you need to do something to bring Bill alive. And you have to remember all this stuff that Jack is doing to Amber is the stuff that Bill wanted to do for years way before the anniversary .he's probably done it. He's not some boring pathetic guy he's a sex machine himself full of taboo ideas. You also have to remember Jack's health is not in a good way. Maybe he starts feeling the effects and in an act of pretending to be nice he calls bill in for fun with amber and Stacey. Giving him a break. Or maybe he sends Stacey out there to entertain Bill. She has always had a secret crush on him . Could you imagine Amber's face even things that sounded like a porn film totally shocking her this time she's wondering what the hell is Bill doing to her best friend. Remember Amber is very protective over Stacey. The jealousy there and curiosity be awesome I can just picture Jack and Amber standing in the doorway watching Bill doing things he never done to Amber that's the only thought Jack was the type of person who would do such stuff lol.

Tony Midwood

Is this story moving forward?